also I like this story

it's a 12 he flight then a 6 he drive lmao

Okay, I just can't go on so I will review here.

This has the potential to have been a really great story. The problem is that I'm only nine chapters in and am confused as can be. Your timeline, as well as the relationships between the characters, shift back and forth from chapter to chapter. You start out saying that Kagome is eighteen, and then say that she was in a relationship with Sesshomaru three years before the story started. So she would have only been fifteen when he left her to marry another. Now you have that her ex is Inuyasha who cheated on her with her sister while they were living together five years ago and that Sesshomaru is like a brother. She would have only been thirteen at the time. Inuyasha has also said that Sesshomaru's annual ball is for those who were at the battle when you have written this story completely AU from the original history.

I'm so busy going back and forth with the history and relationships between the characters that I'm getting more and more confused. It was all over the place for me, but otherwise a good plot from what I've seen otherwise.

Ryu Katanna of the Katanna Twins

Sorry but I couldn't keep reading it was too rushed

I know you meant well but you can't drive to Washington from Japan, they're on two different countenance. I will continue reading but I wouldn't say nothing even with your comment. If it was from Canada or Mexico that'd be possible.

tokyo is...across the fYcking ocean YOU CANT DRIVE THERE

jfc this entire story is a train wreck

I'm sorry but I am going to stop reading this now. There are just too many things that don't add up. In the beginning it states she used to date Sessh but now Inuyasha is her terrible ex and they had an apartment?

You can't drive to Italy from Washington either

You can't drive from Tokyo to Washington. I'm confused but I am going to give this story a chance

Can you clear somethings up. Wasn't kagome with sesshomaru? Why is Bella with Seth so quickly. Didn't she go to save Edward b/c she loved home. And the same with Edward didn't he try to kill himself because thought Bella was dead? Great story by the way but confusing.

Update soon and awesome job you're awesome

Doing awesome job keep it up

So awesome and you did great update

Thanks and you're super awesome. Keep it up

So awesome and you're doing awesome, keep it up