great chapter, keep going with it.

Wayne you are going to wind up and hang your self. Plus Dave is giving you enough rope to do. Stealing money out of someone bank account is a federal crime. plus the bank has your photo and they can prove it.

but then again, how did Wayne even know about Simon bank account. unless he has been watching Simon ever move he makes. And that's called stalking.

I think i know what Dave has planned out all the long. I think Dave has a plan and that is to get Wayne in jail.

Alvin, you didn't hear me say this, but use one of your scheme to take Wayne down. in short use your mouth, don't stop talking and annoy the p-i-s-s out of him. Theodore bake some special cookies that will make Wayne sit on the toilet all day long, every day.

And in fact Alvin, ask Brittany and her sisters to help you and your brothers out on making Wayne's life a living hell on earth everyday. Although you might have to owe Brittany and her sisters a big favor, but i have a feeling they will be happy to help. besides that, the girls might have some sort of a pass with Wayne once before.

Dave keep track of everything Wayne does everyday. When you have a big list, take to to see a lawyer or the police.

but all and all, this was a great chapter that you did. can't wait for the next one to come out.

Great story except the language. But you do make a the point clear for the characters. I don’t like that type of language either so I say “Great job Alvin.”

Interesting start for the guests comment if you go by the 80s series they’re about 3 ft tall if you go by Nickelodeon series they’re about 1.5 ft tall and in the movies they’re less than a foot but I think this is probably going by the 80s series.

This is awesome but are Alvin Simon and Theodore animals or humans and how big are they.

Will you continue this?

this is interesting, and what happen to alvin

Very good start I will definitely read more of this story.