Honesty, I hope the Apollo and fate part gets cut off. After all, you did say she is going to kick the fate. Also, could it be possible if no Olympian (including Apollo) knows of her truth?

Yo, I was just trawling through the site when I stumbled upon your story, and let me just say

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Of course a man can only die once. After all, people die when they're killed, right?

alright good luck!

Am I the only one imagining this version of Bianca meeting hazel?

This story is so awesome there are not enough words to describe it!

No worries, better to realize you want to rewrite something so soon after starting it than waiting until you're half-way through. Looking forward to the new version!

Hey, it's totally fine! I know the feeling too, I've been urging to rewrite a story of mine, but I know if I do I'll probably give it up or smth. Anyways if you need any help or whatever, feel free to ask! Whether it's someone to bounce ideas off, check your spelling or anything like that, I'll probably be available, even just to rant about your day!

All in all, I wish you good luck, and will eagerly await the rewritten version! :)

Hope the rewrite works out! Cheers!

Was not expecting Apollo to show up holy cow, that was pretty tense.

Interesting. I wonder how SI!Biance is gonna handle Artemis' offer.

I definitely like your portrayal of Maria, she sounds wonderful. I now imagine her throwing Hades for a loop and shocking him to the point he actually doesn’t get a chance to argue with her choices before he can recover. Which I can also imagine being somewhat attractive to a practically immortal being that has lived for a very long time and likely is never surprised by anything and hear comes this slip of a woman who is confident enough to be herself but also be respectful in her own way.

I had a feeling the moment Bianca started throwing out media references Apollo would take an interest. Nico’s reaction to his sister not having any more stories was absolutely precious. Really amazing chapter! I hope to read more soon!

YESSSSS! You're back! Loved this chapter! Can't wait for more! Update soon! :D

Hope you continue this is amazing

This was a really cool chapter! I'm kinda intimidated now, since I still haven't read Kane Chronicles. Do you think it'll be understandable still? I sure hope so, I like where this story is going.

Anyways, I loved Bianca and Nico's interactions, she taught her brother English didn't she? XD XD I also loved troll Maria, she's the best, and the interaction with Apollo was great too! He and Hestia are my faves (like in Greek mythology, and in PJO too I guess, but really, Apollo is the god of everything I love)

All in all, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Hopefully it'll take a little less time haha

Good work.