Reviews for A Moment in Time
Stephannie1014 chapter 1 . 7/8
Excellent story! Thank you for sharing!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7
Very clever take. Great creativity.
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 1 . 7/7
This was a delightfully glorious story but left me with so many questions. If Renee was a succubus does that mean they are related to the Denali Succubae? How did Renee die? What was the punishment Jasper had in store for Edwierdo? Maybe sequel or outtake
monica03 chapter 1 . 6/25
This was an interesting and new concept. Thanks for sharing.
Roleplaying.queen chapter 1 . 3/31
should be a story
KITSUNE TAKAHARI chapter 1 . 3/31
Increible historia. Me encanto muchisimo
eeveejacob chapter 1 . 5/23/2019
OMG!
I completely loved it!

Just one question though... Renee was Bella's mother for real and even being Charlie's mate, she didn't stay with him? This was the only thing that got me confused there. Anyway, great story!

Thank you and congrats 3
B34chGr1 chapter 1 . 5/8/2019
This was great, super awesome idea. would love to see it evolve more, maybe what happens with edward, possibly some of their time travel adventures, an encounter with the volturi, or even several over the years. lol
ShadowDragon2112 chapter 1 . 10/24/2018
Wow. I really enjoyed reading this.
DiamondHeart21 chapter 1 . 7/14/2018
This was amazing! Very well done.
Thornsilverfox chapter 1 . 4/28/2018
I'm pretty much in love with this story right now. Super seriously though I'm probably going to reread this several times. I'm just that type of person that likes to reread good stories fairly often. Thank you for this story.
Steph A15 chapter 1 . 12/3/2017
Your story was Amazing. I wish it was longer, I didn't want to stop reading.
together25x3 chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
That was awesome!
Elunea chapter 1 . 9/23/2017
Thanks for the story, I really liked it.
I loved it that Bella and Jasper knew each other as human.
Khyharah chapter 1 . 9/22/2017
this is fun! I loved it
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