I was so excited to see this update! The way you write Shizuo’s character is so easy to imagine. I’m curious about what kind of people Jori’s involved with.

Finally, finally a Durarara fanfic that has my interest! I really like your OC, the way you portray the characters, the dialogue fits perfectly. I couldn’t stop reading. Please please continue!

Wait what? There's a lot going on with her backstory it seems.
You do a good job with the mystery elements in this story I'd say.

I'm really curious about what Jori's job is here. I'm also very intrigued by the storyline here with Shinra since I haven't seen it very much in fanfiction. I'm wondering what caused Jori to want to avoid Izaya so much.
This story definitely interested me from the start I'd say.

I actually have a long time friend with the name Jori. I thought it was cool seeing her name in this story since it's only the third time I've heard it. I keep picturing her now though when I read this lol.

Ohhh it's getting interesting! I looove drama. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I loved it!

Hello Person who wrote this I love this Please finish this I really want to know what Jori's job is and I think other people would love to know to and your really good at writing. If you do finish this are you going have Jori and Shizuo an couple after a while because it seems like that

P.S. sorry for my spelling im writing this fast because im in class.
And yes my real name is falisha.

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