Please do the time of the doctor, the impossible astronaut and the end of time part two.

Please could you make one with the doctor regenerating into a girl.

please continue because this is very interesting and good and I really don't want to be left without a finish to this story.

Please continue because I have been eating up every word and it just kills me to be left in a cliffhanger.

I really love your writing and I wish you had continued...

I hope you do one of 11th doctor Christmas episode or movie or five doctors movie or the Doctor movie or the two doctors I look forward to your future updates

This is great! But you should get Missy, Bill, and the girl who lived. If you do that it will be even better. You should also do a scene where they find out river is the doctor's wife.

Interesting.

I love these sort of fanfics.

Please update soon! This is GREAT!

You should write about midnight

Okay, wow. I'm still not even done with the teleportations, but I just had to comment. You write extremely well, this is brilliant! If you were ever to write an original piece, I'd most definetely read it, this is just fantastic! I've been reading a lot of these fics, but that was such an interesting way to introduce everyone, so rich in details. I think you should keep writing. Who knows, maybe you'll end up writing scripts for Doctor Who

If you do include Bill, would you also include Heather? Cause I doubt (assuming you going to take Bill from the end of The Doctor Falls) that the two of them are going to (want to) be separate when the blue light comes a-callin'. And for that matter, are you going to include the Thirteenth Doctor and her Companions; Ryan, Yaz, and Graham?

Yeah so much for the whole "I actually plan to finish this" jazz, it will have been not updated for an entire year tomorrow.

(Just so you know the further info is completely my opinion and in no way am I telling you what to do, should you ever continue.)

But you know, if you do ever continue this, maybe perhaps skip the (not boring or bad, just lesser) episodes? Like you only do ones like The Empty Child, The Parting of Ways for nine. Ep's 1, 4, 5, 9/10, and 13/14 of Season 2 (because I can't be bothered to list the titles). Ep's 1, 2, maybe 4, 9/10, 11, 12, 13, and 14 for Season 3. Ep's 2, 3, 5/6, 7, 9/10, 11, 12/13/14 (cus they are pretty much connected), 17, and 18/19, for Season 4. Then actually perhaps the entirety of Season 5 except the Xmas Special (but that is entirely up to you, as well as everything else). Then actually again the entirety of Season 6 except again the Xmas special. Then ep's 1, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 11, 13, 14, 15, 16 from Season 7. Moving on to the twelfth doctor I suggest maybe ep's 1, 3, 4, 8, 9, 11/12 and maybe even the Xmas special, because in my opinion it was pretty decent. Then in Season 9 I suggest again maybe the entire series, except for ep 9, (and yes that includes Hell Bent, despite my utter loath for it, it is essential to watch otherwise a lot of the future plot makes no sense what so ever).
Finally, Season 10, I know Bill and Nardole aren't in this story at the moment but maybe you could add them in like you did with Sarah Jane? Anyway from this season I would once again recommend the entirety of the season, including Twice Upon A Time.

Okay so I kinda ranted there but do you get my point? There are quite a few episodes in the season that either don't aid to the continuous plot throughout the season/s, or are just simply rubbish (because we all know they are out there), and we just don't need them. If there are ep's you wanna do that I didn't list go ahead, and the same with ifs listed ones you don't want to do, I am certainly not stopping you, this is just my opinion.

But, on the whole, I do hope you decide to continue with this story, because you're right, there aren't enough of these out there. Plus you are really good at portraying the characters without making them too OCC (which is difficult with television characters).

Anyway, I'm just a random (former Brit) Australian 12-year-old hehe, you don't need to listen to me.

Thanks,

-Shannon:(:

If you ever do get back on this, which I hope you do, could you do Kill the Moon to show that the Doctor isn't always going to be there when they have to make important decisions? If you are not planning on continuing this could you at least let us know by putting up a chapter that says so.