:3 so cute

This chapter is really good. Hell, the entire FanFic so far is really, really, good. Are you planning on continuing this? Because it's freaking amazing.

Please continue this. I love it. It's so cute

¡Continúalo pronto, por favor! Te leo desde México, lo merezco TT~TT

Let the healing begin ;)

awosome chapter!

This is for chapter 3, but it is here because has stupid rules sometimes.

OI! Where's the heart-to-heart where BY irons out all the wrinkles? Yang doesn't lose all her abandonment issues just like that, and Blake just doesn't wrap up her scaredy-cat-ness just like that!

Do you mean welcome her back in welcome arm?

Yo. Try to slow down, I've seen that you have a pretty common problem: rushing. With that brings oversimplified and flat plot that is in general pretty unsatisfying. Also, try varying sentence structure a little more; sticking to one type gets pretty boring quickly. One last thing: get someone to proofread your fics; you're not using the right punctuation in places and it gets pretty glaringly obvious. Other than that, great idea/plot!