| Reviews for Throne |
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   vvink chapter 22 . 11/8/2019 waaah! it's so very exciting! |
| hazelantonette chapter 22 . 10/9/2019 omg. i wanna read more. im so excited to see the next chapter. |
| Sailordeedlit chapter 21 . 6/1/2019 Update please! |
| vvink chapter 21 . 4/25/2019 Thank god for the update! |
| Imadogperson chapter 21 . 2/19/2019 Happy Anniversary of publishing this fanfiction! |
| randomlysaved chapter 20 . 11/13/2018 OMG this is really good. thank you for sharing your talents to this world. This is so good. I hope you are able to update. you are awesome |
| Sailordeedlit chapter 20 . 10/31/2018 I just found this story and i’m So glad I did! I can’t wait to read your future chapters. |
| vvink chapter 20 . 10/5/2018 I love this~! Can't wait for your next update, this story is so good~ |
| Saiyajin Princess Chichi chapter 20 . 10/3/2018 Ok so the story line itself has me hooked in, but there were definitely a few things that you can do better moving forward. Some of your biggest issues come down to spelling, grammar etc. You improved throughout the story on making sure that you capitalized the first letter of every sentence, but there are still some that aren't done properly, same goes for names and titles. Also one of the other things were the spelling errors (fallow, hallow follow, hollow etc), the best advice that I can give you is to just re-read the chapter out loud after you finish it. It will make a huge difference in the flow of your writing and help you to catch errors before you post them. But overall I like the story itself and how you present the characters and their inner thoughts. Definitely keep it up. I want to see how you're able to progress the story line for Soul and Maka moving forward. Good job _ |
| Kamui Senketsu chapter 19 . 9/30/2018 This has me so unbelievably hype lol. |
| Hailsbelles chapter 19 . 7/3/2018 Please please continue! I’m dying for soul to get the story straight! IM DYIN! |
| Snowflakekitty133 chapter 4 . 12/24/2017 This is great but you need to capitalize some stuff. Keep writing though! |
| koreantrash101 chapter 1 . 12/19/2017 So happy! Thanks for the update! I miss Maka and Soul's interactions and can't wait for the next update! |
| seaslug6 chapter 16 . 11/19/2017 I love the updates and look forward to the next chapters! I hope we get some Maka and Soul soon! |
| SwordOfTheGods chapter 15 . 10/4/2017 Alright, interesting story so far. I liked the misunderstanding at the end, adds a little drama, you know. It's a little hard to read, though. Could you try to capitalize the pronouns and starting words of your sentences? That would make it a lot easier to read. Anyway, Keep Writing! |
