lol. aww. that is so sweet. please write more of these. it would be interesting to see.

Loved this!

Okay, LOVED THIS. LIKE SERIOUSLY LOVED IT.

The characters were soooo well written, and I was intrigued by the whole plot. I just. I couldn't get enough.

Great job!

(ps: I noticed that you had Brian's age at the top as 17, but in like the first few paragraphs you say he's 18. Also, I think you meant 'gag' but put 'gages'. Sorry, just wanted to let you know :) )