Reviews for Second chance at childhood |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is great. Will Fred and George confess about their crime? Will Harry stay at the Weasleys during the summer? Please continue |
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![]() ![]() This would be a really good story if certain grammatical errors were fixed. If someone was reading this story to you at bedtime, wouldn't you want the author of said story to know their written word needed fixing? You've got something real genuine here and it's looking great, but please find a beta writer to look over your story so it comes off more professional. I'm sure many greats have beta or ghost writers to help with spelling mistakes. I look forward to reading about Severus' second childhood with the Weasley family. It's a different take on their slice of life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is so sad |
![]() ![]() This could be a decent story but the spelling and grammar errors are very distracting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, how long will it take the twins to find the courage and owns up, that they're responsible for this accident? At least with Ginny, and her Parents, Severus had some supporters who are willing to defend him. I'm still worried that Voldemort figure it out and abduct little Sev for his sinister plans. |
![]() ![]() Oh this is nice I hope sev will get the happiness he deserves |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sev. I hope the Twins get to feel a huge amount of guilt for what they did and how they all have treated Sev over the years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic, please don't let those idiotic Gryffindor from the Hook. They should be forced to taste their own medicine and send in the home situation of Severus. Could be a long overdue wake-up call. They should really make clear, that those malicious acts aren't pranks. And let's better hope that Voldie and Co. doesn't be notified about it or it wouldn't end well for Severus. |
![]() ![]() Poor adorable Snape. |