|Reviews for Choke On Your Jewels And All Your Gold (I'm Not Your Souvenir)
| reberebecca chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
Molto molto originale! Mi è piaciuto un moltissimo. È come avere tanti spoiler di tante storie. Molto interessante. Mi sarebbe piaciuto vedere di più del finale ma comunque una storia meravigliosa.
| Karma chapter 1 . 1/22/2019
Im crying so much
This is so good
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2018
I just want to say this was absolutely beautifully k and amazing is such a great way. I hope you continue stories like this because it was rather specatcular. Please don’t ever stops writing. Ever.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2018
This needs one more chapter with what ended up happening between the two... I guess it fells like a very open ending, like it's not finished yet...
| Izzy chapter 1 . 11/5/2018
You deserve so much recognition and love for all of your fic’s. They are all so poetically beautiful and they invoke such raw emotions while I read them. Thank you so much for sharing your craft with us.
| KuramaxChan chapter 1 . 10/18/2018
Wow, amazing work of art ! Loved it !
| Charlie0925 chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
Aww, I loved this! Brilliant writing here honey! ;o)
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 1 . 7/28/2018
Sweet story. It reminded me one of the books in the Fallen series.
| Anon chapter 1 . 3/26/2017
Dang that was still low of Marvolo to send her through alternate universes to see that they're meant to be together and that some lives have it harder than others but still lol
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2017
I want to premise this by saying I enjoy both your writing style and your world building, and have greatly enjoyed many of your stories.
However, I just couldn't get behind the premise of this story. I don't assume you set out to twist gaslighting into something romantic, but that's how it comes across...Marvolo emotionally manipulating Lys though deliberate twisting of facts/reality.
To this effect, I can not find romance in this, or any scenario, that relies on a man gaslighting a woman into believing they are in love. If he loved her, he'd find a way to prove it in a way that didn't rely on manipulation and didn't violate her autonomy.
I really do hope you continue writing, but...it might take me a bit to get the sour taste this fic left me with out of my mouth.
| skylereile chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
ignore madeline...your works are great. as it is this is fanfiction let your imagination run wild it doesnt have to mesh with the cannon, if you do you'll just limit yourself. for the readers there is a synopsis written IF YOU DIDN'T LIKE WHAT IS WRITTEN THEN DON'T READ
| ayla chapter 1 . 2/21/2017
ok so i happened to see on of the comments by madeline please ignore her your stories are absolutely amazing and it gives another magical perspective on the wizarding world and its culture im so so happy that i have stumbled on your stories and i really cant stop re reading them! thank you for effort in writing all these stories and sharing them with us 3
| Madeline chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
Err, sorry, I reread my review and it's a lot more harsh and rude than I meant for it to be. I really do love your writing and ideas, they're amazing and really imaginative. It just is more original fiction with the characters' names than actually Harry Potter fanfiction. Your stories are amazingly written and the ideas and world building are so cool, but it's kind of become a completely different world. Please don't take this as me insulting your writing, because that's not my intent! It's just that your stories are more original fiction than Harry Potter. While I don't really like your characters (my previous review kind of covered that, I think), your stories are great. Your writing is detailed and I love the prose. Your world building is so complex and unique (although not really the Harry Potter world). Your ideas and story plots are imaginative and completely original. The only issue (outside of my previously mentioned issues with the characters) is that it doesn't read or mesh with the Harry Potter universe.
| lilyoftheval5 chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
Best wishes Ly.
(Liked the first universe she fell in the best.)
| Madeline chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
To be quite frank, I don't understand why you continue to write Harry Potter fanfiction. This isn't meant to reflect on your writing abilities, but your stories don't typically mesh with Harry Potter cannon. The characterization and magical abilities aren't at all cannon. This isn't Harry Potter fanfiction, outside of some similar names. (On a different note, I do have to admit that I dislike how you write romantic relationships a lot of the time. There are just too many unhealthy and toxic behaviors written romantically for me to like them, such as kidnapping, refusing a no, the obsessive jealousy, no man allowed close to someone's "bonded", etc. The slut shaming of witches "sullying" themselves and how female characters treat others with disdain is also another issue to me.)
If you're going to write stories like these, it'd make more sense for them to be original fiction, because that's what they're already are. They don't make sense in the Harry Potter cannon and it's not it's at all in character for the vast majority of characters. Your actual writing is very good and I enjoy it, but that doesn't make it Harry Potter fanfiction.