| Reviews for The Real Enemy |
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   Rhettaram chapter 26 . 9/15/2018 space fajita? what is this "space fajita"? |
| Imiyaki chapter 12 . 9/9/2018 Anyone else have random code all throughout chapter 12 instead of spaces? |
| HetaRosFangirl chapter 27 . 7/24/2018 Okay. Im back, and happy to be so, because this got even better since i've visited. Characterization? Fantastic. The struggle in Keith's feelings regarding his duties, his family and his friends were breathtaking, and had me on edge the entire time. Lance's insecurities were a constant pretense, even though you rarely wrote in his perspective or even noted his inner struggles. And that takes real talent. Everyone else may have taken a back seat, but they were always there, making their presence known; Shiro's help, Allura's opening up to Keith and the Galra race, Hunk's job of keeping the team in check, and even Pidge's role of helping out her bro Lance in any way she could. This whole universe is extremely complex, and is a main cause for my avid devotion to reading all of this as fast as possible. The Dad's of Marmora, even, had a shocking place in my heart, as I've never been invested in the Galra Keith/BoM side of things, and I even came to love your OC's just as much as the others, which is a real accomplishment. AKA; I love this, and i'm immediately reading the next story(s) in this universe. I can't get enough of this! I can't wait to see how this expands! Thank you for making such an awesome story in your free time, and continuing on with it:) As Always, Happy Writing~ |
| MississippiAnn chapter 4 . 6/30/2018 Uh... there's a code issue here in chapter 4. Meaning it looks like code, not regular text. (So far I'm loving the writing and the AU though!) |
| The Best Guesst chapter 27 . 6/17/2018 I loved this story and I can't wait for the next story now! |
| Pokeevee57 chapter 27 . 6/3/2018 Aw, this was so cute and amazing and-! Wait a sec, lemme calm down. So this was awesome. I totally loved the way you write the story, and the bits of Klance (I’m total trash, help me :D). The plot was well-written, and god, I loved everything about this story. So thanks for writing it! The beginning had totally caught me off guard, but in a really good way! So thanks, I really enjoyed this! Can’t wait for the next one, hahahaha... :D |
| Death Wand chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 Thank god! An installment, for a second there I thought I won't be able to read another chapter of this story. So fucking glad I was wrong |
| An Amber Pen chapter 27 . 6/2/2018 I'm sad to see this story end, but I'm ridiculously pleased that this just means there will be another installment. Yay! I loved this story from top to bottom. Definitely keep writing please! |
| Lala Norisu chapter 27 . 6/1/2018 Aww that is nice keith had bright future |
| An Amber Pen chapter 26 . 3/25/2018 Keith's heart isn't the only one melting here. Still loving it! Definitely keep writing please! |
| Lala Norisu chapter 26 . 3/25/2018 I glad him healing |
| KentuckyMacFuck chapter 17 . 3/4/2018 I'M NOT CRYING! YOU'RE CRYING! D'X |
| KentuckyMacFuck chapter 10 . 3/4/2018 Lance and Keith are precious cinnamon roll bros and I am here for it! :'D |
| KentuckyMacFuck chapter 9 . 3/4/2018 Awe... just... awe...! :'D |
| KentuckyMacFuck chapter 8 . 3/4/2018 No, Yes, No, Yes, No, YES!... X'D |
