Reviews for Promise |
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![]() ![]() ![]() so much sweet fluff! Loved this final installment. Thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I just say how much I love how well these three pieces tie together? "Popcorn" presents the idea of their relationship with Sakura's revelation of her fear of horror movies, but as we move into "Claustrophobia" and "Promise," we see this idea of fear and horror shift from Sakura's fear of fictional movie horror to Itachi's revelation of the ninja life as a horror movie, reality-as-horror that doesn't frighten Sakura but has unsettled Itachi due to personal life demands. Then their relationship grows a little by their spar in the dark (the horror during the movie horror setting that Sakura doesn't fear), and Itachi shares his claustrophobic fear (tying into his feeling unsettled by being "tied down" by his upcoming clan responsibilities). Then this theme of horror and fear shifts into what frightens Sakura most in the end, when Itachi almost dies after the "ninja life reality" horror. But they both make it out of the basement together and find each other, Sakura no longer scared of Itachi dying and Itachi a little less frightened of his clan responsibilities if Sakura will be with him. That was kinda convoluted, but I just wanted to say how much I loved how well these three worked together on multiple binding levels to form the series. I really, really enjoyed them and was impressed by the framework. Thanks so much for sharing them, and I hope that you're staying safe right now. Take care, and happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write Itachi so endearingly and with such convincing character. I'm simply gushing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWW! This was wonderful! Well done! |
![]() ![]() LOVE SO MUCH ALL THE PREQUELS! AND OF COURSE THIS! NEED A SEQUEL TWT |
![]() ![]() ![]() Qur lindo y tierno. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nope, my first reaction is still going to be nonsense babbling. I had the biggest, most starry-eyed shit-eating grin on my face as I finished this one. Then commence more cooing and clapping my hands against my face is glee. This was delightful and such a cute and enjoyable read. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww you should continue this it is very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how your stories are K and just pure and sweet. It's a great break from all the fanservice out of character M rated fics out there. Keep it up. Hoping to see more ItaSaku fics from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute~ . |
![]() ![]() ![]() *squeals* I so love your ItaSaku fics~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED IT! I love this serie of short chapters that you are writing, and I sinceresly hope that this isn't the last one. You write really well, and the way that you portrait Itachi is perfect. I loved this one, really! Lots of love x |
![]() ![]() I'm a little sad that this 3-shot of yours has come to an end. Ugh I want more! Looking forward to reading more of your stories though :) keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You mentioned in one of your stories that this story is part of a three-part storyline (read all of it and loved it). I hope you'll keep posting more awesome fics like these :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent. very well written. I do wish there was more but isn't that always the case with a good story? |