Reviews for The Persistence of Memory |
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Tetho chapter 3 . 4/9 Another one bites the dust :(. |
Ghost2656 chapter 3 . 6/24/2018 The fuck? |
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Addles28 chapter 3 . 3/30/2018 Dead? |
LordLoverDuck chapter 3 . 2/13/2018 continue please, i wish to read more |
Son of Salem chapter 1 . 1/15/2018 update soon |
Fuyuriku chapter 3 . 9/28/2017 but the temperature drop. dropped.* I assume and tile around her tiles* I assume _ Still not enough to really judge the story. It's still in the intro phase, after all. _ Thank you for the read. |
Fuyuriku chapter 2 . 9/28/2017 Having run out of air ran* exhaustion over taking him overtaking* rag-dolled her ? ragdolled, though you could go with a better setup for the word what're moping around for? what're ya moping* I guess, would make more sense at least _ Thank you for the read. |
Fuyuriku chapter 1 . 9/28/2017 the energy that protects your now is yours "your now is yours"? His refocused on his enemy He* He had all but double downed doubled down* _ Thank you for the read. |
prism123 chapter 3 . 9/14/2017 This story is great so far. Writing quality is really good and plot is interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes. |
RareNyte chapter 3 . 9/1/2017 Interesting so far. Like the way Naruto's memories and consciousness have been slowly bleeding in and melding with Jaune's own. Your descriptions and writing style are fantastic, really, it's a joy to read. Am curious to see how it develops. |
FF8cerberus chapter 3 . 7/23/2017 Man, each chapter is like a tease! Everytime it looks like there will be a breakthrough it gets cutoff. It's frustratingly exciting. I really want to know what's going to happen when he accepts his past life and what he intends to do about his current one. You really have me psyched up for this. Hope to see an update soon. Until next time. |
NugiSpringield chapter 3 . 7/13/2017 Is this dead? |
AngryOwl chapter 1 . 7/10/2017 This fic would make Dali proud. |
UseFistNotMouth chapter 3 . 7/3/2017 This story is pretty messy. You go too deep into Jaune's perspective. It would be better if you showed these issues from an external perspective. |