Reviews for The Persistence of Memory
Tetho chapter 3 . 4/9
Another one bites the dust :(.
Ghost2656 chapter 3 . 6/24/2018
The fuck?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2018
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Addles28 chapter 3 . 3/30/2018
Dead?
LordLoverDuck chapter 3 . 2/13/2018
continue please, i wish to read more
Son of Salem chapter 1 . 1/15/2018
update soon
Fuyuriku chapter 3 . 9/28/2017
but the temperature drop.
dropped.* I assume

and tile around her
tiles* I assume
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Still not enough to really judge the story. It's still in the intro phase, after all.
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Thank you for the read.
Fuyuriku chapter 2 . 9/28/2017
Having run out of air
ran*

exhaustion over taking him
overtaking*

rag-dolled her
? ragdolled, though you could go with a better setup for the word

what're moping around for?
what're ya moping* I guess, would make more sense at least
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Thank you for the read.
Fuyuriku chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
the energy that protects your now is yours
"your now is yours"?

His refocused on his enemy
He*

He had all but double downed
doubled down*
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Thank you for the read.
prism123 chapter 3 . 9/14/2017
This story is great so far. Writing quality is really good and plot is interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes.
RareNyte chapter 3 . 9/1/2017
Interesting so far. Like the way Naruto's memories and consciousness have been slowly bleeding in and melding with Jaune's own. Your descriptions and writing style are fantastic, really, it's a joy to read. Am curious to see how it develops.
FF8cerberus chapter 3 . 7/23/2017
Man, each chapter is like a tease! Everytime it looks like there will be a breakthrough it gets cutoff. It's frustratingly exciting. I really want to know what's going to happen when he accepts his past life and what he intends to do about his current one. You really have me psyched up for this. Hope to see an update soon. Until next time.
NugiSpringield chapter 3 . 7/13/2017
Is this dead?
AngryOwl chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
This fic would make Dali proud.
UseFistNotMouth chapter 3 . 7/3/2017
This story is pretty messy. You go too deep into Jaune's perspective. It would be better if you showed these issues from an external perspective.
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