Reviews for A King's Duty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, honestly I don't want to wait 3 years for your next update so do your best and update soon. Stay Safe. |
![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this story very much and I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First time reading your story, i'm quite glad of the direction you are taking, hope to see a new update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good! I can't believe Regis was that direct with Noctis, but it brought a smile to my face. Nice to see their parting was easy and natural. TWT Poor Iris though! I can't entirely feel sorry for her, because I just want so much Noct/Luna fluff. Luna's letter was so sweet. And damn was Umbra well timed, right after Noctis delivered the news. Now I do hope less things will go to hell. It's hard to relive the beginning of the game so many times. I'm glad for the changes you brought and how worried Noctis is of leaving his citizens for only a matter of days. He really cares for his people. He's worthy of his king title. Can't wait to read more. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() love, love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm this seem like an interesting take on the story, I look forward to reading more. I'm really curious now, will Luna be in insomnia for the events of kingsglaive? Will she be in altissia waiting for him? Or meet noct and the gang along the way? ( you don't have to answer for spoiler reasons I'm just voicing my curiosity) |
![]() ![]() Can you have Luna meet Noct and the rest of boy band somewhere. Not have her go to Insomnia. Having her there in kingsglave after Noct made no sense to me. I get she had to get the ring to Noct but they had conflicts. It would be good unlike game Noct have some time together that not is right before she dies in the game. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please CONTINUE! I love how you invisioned the announcement to everyone and to see that Iris there to hear as well. This is wonderfully written. I hope you update frequently :) I'm excited how you would have your own way with XV's story. Sure am hoping for the creativity, cuz you are doing it as well as I can see. Well done. |
![]() ![]() Super intrigued to see this more aware Noct and co- can't wait to see how that affects the rest of the journey! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds to me that Noctis and Luna were in a secret/established relationship before the treaty. I'm surprised that Glauca is out in the open already, and not as the disguised Drautos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang feels bad for Iris. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is interesting to see Noctis more aware of the events around him. I look forward to where you take this story:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good and well written! Although I love adorkable characters, it would be refreshing to see a spin on the story where Noct's already prepared to take on the mantle of his duty. However, I'm curious as to what character development arc you'll be going for then (I hope there's some! While I do enjoy bamf for main characters, at some point they need to face real conflict that they can't just overcome without a sweat). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geez Regis! Way to give your son anxiety! Damn! lol XD This is interesting. I'll be waiting for more. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() Thank you for this wonderful chapter:) Can't wait for the next update! |