This story is SO well written and makes me feel what they're feeling. I am so emotionally constipated that I relate so hard lol. I'm absolutely in love with your storytelling and writing style and you're able to separate their views wonderfully, which is something I sometimes struggle with. Thank you for writing this!

I absolutely adored this story, not only because it involves one of my guilty pleasure tropes the "best friends with benefits who are secretly in love" but also because it's so well written. The sentences were beautiful - you could really understand and feel the love, the anguish, the desire the characters felt. The story was well paced and we'll crafted. IMO you managed to keep everyone in characater and you managed to give each character their own individual and distinctive voice. Well done :)

That was the best thing I've ever read

My heart! And my poor cheeks lol sooo well done! I've got the shipper giggles and sighs going on for sure. Fantastic from start to finish!

Impressive

This is the type of fic I was searching for a long time! Is every thing I wanted to read. Thanks, thanks for so wonderful history!

The story was good but there were parts of the story that could have be better to make the story more appealing.

I loved loved loved loved loved this! It had me holding on the entire time, I hated every moment I had to put it down. (Which was only a few times thankfully). You have fantastic imagery by the way!

First of all, why the hell doesn't this have more reviews!?
I really liked this fanfic, which is weird because I normally dislike AUs but somehow this one made sense to me. I forgot all about it being an AU and just enjoyed it as a story. The characters fit in so well with what I think they are, so I loved them.
It’s incredibly well described and I… well, I loved it. I couldn’t stop reading it, not for one second, I had to find out what would happen.
Thank you for sharing this!

The one fic AU thingy that is always on my "No no" list is friends with benefits AU since friends with benefits turn romantic relationship is just positive reinforcement. I like the fact your fic didn't start as some cheesy fic where Soul and Maka just fuck and then fall in love, but actually love each other before they start fucking. The scene where Maka asked to kiss him just had my feelings running! It was a good fic :3

Omg! Once I started reading this I couldn't stop! You truly captured both characters so perfectly! Yes Liz and Spirit were there too but I have been such a fan of MakaxSoul that my heart swells for the pairing lol I hope you continue writing plenty more awesome fics as this one :)

Wow! Wow! Amazing story. I finally got done with it. I love a good sex scene. Whether it be in movies, t.v. shows, books I love it all. You took one simple idea and turned it into a masterpiece. I love how you incorporated Maka and Soul's relationship of being 'just friends' but actually they love each other. I have seen it done many many many times since I have been on ffn but never have I came across a more well written, full of fluff, hair pulling out experience than this story. You took Maka's issues with her dad and Soul's issues of being Mr. Cool back in college to now and wrapped this whole story up in a tight neat little bow. Kudos to you. If you couldn't tell I loved the story. I love it!

eeeeeeeeee. was fangirling all through the story. I wanted to jump in there and give both soul and Maka a swift kick in the ass and be like...really? catch a wake up will you? I love how you described the wanting and passion between them (even though they are just friends -roll eyesanyway well done on an amazing story. loved the concept

this was sooo cuteeeeee! loved it

Yes, give me my demi babes! This was all really good, and honestly any mistakes I saw were minimal and didn't take me out of the story. "You always wanted to be like your mom" is the best line in the whole fic, hands down. So many feels from just one simple line. Excellent work!