This story is bad.

Please continue

Please finish this story. You are an awesome writer. I want to see what Kelly is up to. And i also want to see Brenda/Dylan back together.
This is a good story. Please consider coming back to finish it.

Love this alot cant wait to read more update soon please

ooh can't wait to read more.

Wonderful, an update. I enjoyed reading it.

Not sure what happened to Brenda before they moved, but it seems some how Kelly knows/is involved, I hope Kelly goes to prison and stays there a very very long time. Least Donna is seeing what's happening, even if no one else is. Dylan better have a blinking good reason go choosing Kelly after being with Brenda the night before.
If Brenda takes Dylan back, it's going to have to be him proving himself and regaining her trust, it can't be straight away, fret what he's done.

Love it can't wait see what next

Tried to reply to your msg, but it got sent back saying you were over quotea?

Great job.

Love it please continue

I really like your Brenda and Dylan stories, I just wish you would continue the ones started, as we only seem to get a couple of chapters, then no more. Please add to the ones started. I like many you have written so far, but would like to see some of them completed.