This is too cute XD I like the way you develop the storyline, smooth and very realistic. Although i feel that you are quite rushing some parts? But all in all great plot
About characters, as an ardent follower of both series I think that some KnB chars are quite ooc. Kagami, Kuroko and Kise are perfectly potrayed, however i think Aomine should be more brash and laid-back. He wouldnt pick up a random girl out of the blue especially if she isnt physically attractive (don't get me wrong Umi is beautiful but we can all agree she's lacking in the boobs department lol) . And also, i think Umi is more suited for mature guys like Akashi/Midorima/Himuro . (But I'm also kinda excited for the future development of Aomine and Umi).
Sorry for the lengthy review, GREAT work! Keep up the good work!

Maki a best.

Haven't reviewed for a while but I think that Kasamatsu is a bit OOC. I mean if he noticed any girl, he would be shaking like a puppy and is too nervous to talk with any girl in general. Sure, he's the guy with an iron fist when it comes to discipline his team, yet extremely shy to girls. When Kise talks with Eli and her sister, he didn't react if he was there.

Moriyama Yoshitaka, I'm sure that he would find a way to try to get a girl's attention to fawn for him but failed (Seen in the KnB PSP game when he's with Kise, if he has hot women to befriend with and he wants a chat with them.).

Hayakawa Mitsuhiro, he wants rebounds but his words doesn't make any sense since there are some missing syllables in each word he makes.

Anyway... I hope you can fix it soon and hoping for more GoM and μ's, even with ARISE on screen time. It would be a surprise since after Kise, there's Midorima and him, chatting with Nozomi would be very interesting.

Que intenso...espero que sigas esta historia hasta el final

Aomine and Umi are like the complete opposites XD XD I think Umi suits Midorima/Akashi more (the hardworking, serious types). XD But everything goes well so far! Please keep up the good work!