Decided to give this a looksy. I like what i have read so far. As you know me, if i were to add in one requesr, you know what it would be. However, this is your story, your show. I’m just along for the ride.

This story is so amazing! I love it! I'm definitely looking forward to more! I'm a bit of an AllenxRoad shipper so that scene with them was really really cute. Your doing a great job!

Cute chapter, I would say. Enjoyable, and I want more. Update soon!

this is such a good story
i really hope you continue

Aaaw ye sweet fight scene!

This os soooo good, and I totally LOVE it. Damn, the way you portraying Allen is just so awesome, and i love how badarse and just bloody amazing he is. Damn, gotta love you. Update soon. I'll try to help with title!

I don't understand the latter half - starting when he commanded the guards. Can you explain that?

Keep Up The Good Work~!

Wow, so it wasn't Kanda or Lavi that had been sneaking around and stealing things from the Noah. But I really can't wait to find out who really was behind all the heist.

Nice story so far.

ooooh rhis story is going to be goood. I want more. I love the way you're portraiting both Allen and Tim. They're awesome. And I need more chapters like, right now. Keep going, it's already in my favourites. But only one thing. DONT ABANDON THIS STORY PLEASE 'cause a lot people tend to do it and that's such a waste of good plot and awesome skills

Ooo I really like your depiction of human Timcanpy!

Cool Timcanpy as an informant, really cool Tim. Really can't wait for the next chapter, could the Rats be Lavi and Kanda?

Very nice writing! Fics with first/second p.o.v. are usually terrible, but this one's an exceptionI personally hope supernatural powers are involved, and I look forward to an update!

Oooh~ This is very hooking! I look forward to more!

That's a very interesting P.O.V. you used there, in a good manner of course.
I'll definitely keep an eye out for this one~