| Reviews for The Do Over |
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   jamesduen chapter 44 . 10/30/2019 I feel I should point out that gate travel is one way. The Jaffa would not be able to grab someone and retreat through the gate without closing the connection and redialing. Since Earth has no DHD in Cannon, you would want to change the events or include a minor Goa'uld with the invasion force. The Jaffa alone wouldn't be able to understand Earth technology quickly enough to dial back out with events as they currently are. |
| Rogue Survivor chapter 1 . 9/12/2019 There are far too many exclamation marks in this story. |
| Miles M chapter 3 . 8/3/2019 Jack says to not tell his daughter and they all tell her. hmmm... |
| Guest chapter 80 . 6/4/2019 Turned out to be a good story. Rocky start, but I'm glad I stuck with it. Well done! |
| Guest chapter 66 . 6/3/2019 Greatest American Hero cross? Why not.. |
| Eagleone 55 chapter 80 . 5/19/2019 I really liked this story |
| Eagleone 55 chapter 11 . 5/19/2019 really liking this story, I hope you have completed this one. |
| Eagleone 55 chapter 9 . 5/19/2019 in the show the clones lived for seven days, After Jack was snatched |
| Eagleone 55 chapter 1 . 5/19/2019 this is a good story |
| ZhaWarudo chapter 2 . 5/2/2019 Too easy going, Jack suddenly blabbling out his big secret and the team is like ok we believe you and that's it. Also seems to be too family centered, priority check save lives and make Earth stronger, not romanticize like a teenaged girl. |
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 4/24/2019 well seems like jack wasted a lot of time. he should have contacted daniel early and let him to osiris' ship in egypt, that way he wouls have had some proof and 30 year extra research in alien tech |
| Hi-Fionn chapter 80 . 9/17/2018 I’m sorry about the comments I left on the other story I know you blocked me from replying but I needed to apologise and secondly to tell you that this is one of the best stories I’ve read on this site and I think that with a lot of your stories you have some real talent. |
| sg1star chapter 61 . 9/7/2018 Really enjoying this story and the do over.. |
| Neroscurse chapter 31 . 5/21/2018 Enjoying the story. It's so different yet feels familiar. I like the direction you're going and how you seem to be pulling the best out of the series and fixing the parts that just didn't track well with the fan base. Thanks for the fun reading. |
| DaniMom22 chapter 80 . 5/4/2018 No no no ... I don't want this to be over...what a fantastic adventure! Thank you so much for sharing this with us :) |
