Reviews for Fire and Blood |
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Ilena Petrova chapter 1 . 5/15 Sad you never continued this story |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16 Sorry about the anonymous, lost my account and I keep forgetting to remake it. I definitely like this story and it has a lot of potential. However it was a bit difficult to read because of the text and then the translation under it in parentheses. I think it's an awesome concept you might want to start off with the other language first and then have just he transition in italics so it's not hard to read. This is just a suggestion, great job and keep going! I want to read more |
Lordlexx chapter 1 . 3/27 I can't fathom why you thought writing all the dialogue in a different language was a good idea, but it is not. It completely destroys the flow of reading, I have to search for the translated parts and I quickly lose what is going on. |
Wika0304 chapter 1 . 2/15/2019 please update, it starts really interesting |
sn0wy.mk21 chapter 1 . 1/30/2019 this is pretty awesome plsssss write more. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2018 Any uplate ideas |
DragonTamer01 chapter 1 . 5/31/2017 Love it already! Keep up the great work! |
BloodyAvenger21 chapter 1 . 4/22/2017 pretty interesting premise I guess...why did you make them speck in a language that was Swedish or from one of the surrounding countries? it was cool don't get me wrong but it was a bit odd. also I got the feel that harry dreamt of aria. |
andjelija.nenic chapter 1 . 3/9/2017 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
Anime Princess chapter 1 . 2/17/2017 Interesting, very interesting! |
Sceonn chapter 1 . 2/5/2017 So damn distracting, can't even read with ease. Seriously, remove the gibberish. |
BingeReader97 chapter 1 . 2/3/2017 I like the idea and your story is well written I will be back for more. The one thing I didn't like was the 2 different languages, that could have been discarded by using italics to signal a different language instead of using it to increase word count. |
Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 1/27/2017 Jon Snow, Daenerys Targaryen, and...Arya Stark? Or is it Cersei Lannister? It can't be Melisandre... |
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 1/24/2017 well at least they aren't the twins. irony is Sirius could pass as Ramsey Bolton due to what he tried to do to snape using his beloved rabid-dog like friend to chase n maim n kill someone. |
Lord Black-Scale chapter 1 . 1/23/2017 Loki Palmer at it again with a good Hp crossover idea. I really want to see where you take this one. So please please continue it. |