An inner sorrow similar to her other self. A melancholy mood.

That was really well done. I legit felt sorry for Minako which is new because she's portrayed as such a happy and cheerful character in the fandom. The emotion behind this was strong, I'd love to see her thoughts on the journey, maybe you can expand this and add another chapter where she goes through the journey? Hopefully that happens.
Great work!

You are awesome. I mean this completely ruined my day but in terms of writing this was badass. Sure there's an error here or there but that applies to everyone and it's especially surprising since English isn't your native tongue. You have a gift for character development and generally making them and their lives depressing as hell. Keep it up, you're very good at this

Holy hell, that was amazing. A few errors here and there but the emotion was conveyed extremely well, the feels and pressure on Minako was explained very, very well, you can feel how fucked up and depressed she is. Good job on that.
English might not be your native language but you definitely have a gift in terms of writing characters, this was such a sharp contrast to the usual personality of Minako and you pulled it off perfectly. She really does seem empty and void and I dig this interpretation, Minato has gotten it so much, refreshing to see it on Minako. Again, amazing job. Just keep working and writing, keep working on spag errors.
Also, did you draw the picture yourself? Because that is amazing too.
You go dude, keep working and you'll be a top writer, hell, you are already there in terms of character and development.
Cheers!