Reviews for Externalities
urshurak chapter 10 . 8/25/2019
Well written and entertaining!
armysugakookie chapter 11 . 4/12/2019
"Kaito, for one, felt like he had been stabbed in the heart the moment the kid had turned that dreaded knowing look at him. Far from keeping him safe, that detective was going to be the death of him."

Why? Why's he afraid?
armysugakookie chapter 10 . 4/12/2019
The end! Nice work xD i love how u wrote kaito and conan's interactions it feels so in character and real. I love to see more of them just hanging out or something. Can't wait to read the sequel!
armysugakookie chapter 9 . 4/12/2019
You're definitely smart for being able to think up such an elaborate plot like this.

"They probably used sleeping gas. I can smell the residue on my collar."

An ordinary high school boy shouldn't know how sleeping gas smells like... that should warrant suspicion. But then again, as KID's romantic partner it would make sense for him to experience those gadgets and their effects.

"This voice was bad news to his friend, which was strange since the owner of the voice should be no enemy."

For a second I thought you meant Snake
armysugakookie chapter 8 . 4/12/2019
Im seriously enjoying this profound development xD

Haibara stopped, her eyes glinting. "Unless what, you decided you want to court-"

I choked

'So what? It's not like she's going to curse you or anything.'

If only u knew... if only u knew...

Kaito slapped both his hands over his face and groaned. "What" he paused, "possessed your brilliant little mind to come up with that hypothesis, Tantei-kun?"

Your Brilliant little mind xD
armysugakookie chapter 7 . 4/12/2019
I. AM. DYING! OMG
I DID NOT EXPECT THAT TWIST IN THE END HAHAHAHAHA
armysugakookie chapter 6 . 4/12/2019
"However, a name doesn't tell everything, an identity doesn't reveal the heart."

This sentence is beautiful.

"Smells ingrained themselves into memory in special situations after all, and they were difficult to disguise and switch around as quickly as faces."

That is true and very smart. I'd love if conan finds out kaito's true identity by his smell out of all things because it's never been used b4

"Kaito took out his handkerchief to wipe his slightly damp hands, and then inwardly frowned as he got a whiff of that perfume again."

Oh damn she got her perfume onto the handkerchief...

"Conan whispered behind his back, sounding impressed but somehow not… surprised?"

Shit... did he know it's kaito's mom?

And then the weird question the little boy had asked him right before the heist. "Who is Kaitou KID to you?"

Yeah... definitely sounds like conan's onto something...
armysugakookie chapter 5 . 4/12/2019
"But wow, do you have pent-up frustrations against this guy or what?"

Lmao so do i. So do i.

"And oh, this person who oh so happens to look like you, oh so happens to be a magician, oh so happens to know Inspector Nakamori well, oh so happens to be extremely intelligent, oh so happens to be uncomfortable around detectives, also happens to not give two hoots that a brat like you can deal with crimes without batting an eyelash?"

Haibara, always the blunt and smart one. Sometimes i even think shes smarter than conan
armysugakookie chapter 4 . 4/12/2019
"Hey Meitantei." Kaito started, mind buzzing with potential ideas.

Oh god every time i see Kaito Conan those nicknames KID gave him i just get so nervous that conan might find out. Be more careful! Kaito!

Conan stared openmouthed at the other boy as he realized what had happened. "Is that a grappling hook?"

OMG kaito r u serious. Too obvious!

"Hey, Tantei-kun, can that watch of yours tell time?"

It's a WATCH kaito, lmao
armysugakookie chapter 3 . 4/12/2019
"Though he guessed it wouldn't be too bad to make the teen sweat a little."

And you said you aren't evil...

"It kind of looked like the car of Jii's friend that created Kaito's gadgets for his heists."

I've always wondered if Agasa hakase really is the one making those gadgets... he should know who KAITO KID is...

"The boy literally threw himself off skyscrapers to catch him off guard; and Kaito couldn't count how many times he had to throw himself out of buildings and planes to get away from the boy."

I love this comparison

"I won't let Tantei-kun here die." Kaito promised,

Why isn't conan suspicious of Kaito calling him "Tantei-kun" which is a name only KID calls him?
armysugakookie chapter 2 . 4/12/2019
Nice. I like conan and kaiyo's conversation and how it may seem like a normal conversation when in reality it's more like a battle of wits. Kinda like Light and L's conversation. Each time they talk is like an attack. Very well-written.

"He absentmindedly wondered if those little changes he found were indications that a murder would occur in this restaurant today, considering Tantei-kun would be gracing it with his presence."

Conan the Grim Reaper xD
armysugakookie chapter 1 . 4/12/2019
I'm enjoying this way too much xD
Fi Suki Saki chapter 11 . 3/19/2019
The Deleted scene in the Car Scene is Hilarious because Kaito felt scared when Conan said he would protect him! Lmao OMG XD

Anyway, this is the second fic I have found and read in DCMK where Kaito misunderstood as KID's Lover! Lmao
And to think both of them also have Heist where his mother the one who pretend to be KID and left a memorable Heist.
Poor Kaito... Lol

I Love how Conan finally get all piece of Informations of the Truth and he let Kaito know too.
I'm so Glad!
It was Fun seeing Conan feeling confused and all by the guess, analysis, theory, manipulation and all. But also Frustrating. So I'm Glad!

But I also Enjoy how much Kaito and Conan work together because while Kaito pretend to know nothing, he still treat Conan as Detective. And they even Prank Heiji! OMG

I Love this fic so Much!
SakuraS41 chapter 11 . 1/16/2019
I enjoyed myself reading this fic! Thanks so much for sharing! Love your writing and the way you characterise this pair!
Guest chapter 7 . 12/13/2018
pffht hahaha
hilarious
love it
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