This was a wonderful story, I loved it.

I LOVED this story. Thank you for your time and effort.

Oooh, Mads Mikkelsen would be an EXCELLENT Euron. That goofy Euron from the show, sucked.

Don't listen to the cranks. This is a good story. I like your heroine and I'm happy that she's married to Willis. I'm glad that she rescued Rickon and Shaggy dog. She'll be a Dragon rider, I'm sure. Good job.

Nice

Cersei is a manipulative, venomous, and heartless women just by seeing how she treated Elain horribly for being Robert's child and not one of her three incest golden children, she's also an awful mother!

thank u for keeping Prince Oberyn alive because he is one of my favorite in game of thrones and so far u have made a really awesome book

That was a beautiful story

Was a fun read. Wished there was more action with Elain. You got her armor, a bow, a knife, hunting skills from her father, and not once did she ever really fight someone, or at the very least go hunting herself with the Stags. I also wished there was more family time between the Baratheons. Going hunting with Robert, travelling with Renly/Loras, go sailing with Stannis. Just more of Westeros, the lands, other than the households of main families.

I noticed from your profile and this story's picture that you are probably a fan of female archers, like Katniss and Susan Pevensie. Ever think of writing a Game of Thrones/A Song of Ice and Fire story with a female lead archer, who isn't associated with the main Westeros houses or areas, like the Wall, from your Warg Maiden story?
Take a Katniss or Susan and put them in a strong, but not main house, like House Dayne, and change their looks to match their parent, like Ashara Dayne (who has a pretty open backstory to play with). Then have them form a group, maybe including the Sand Snakes, along with hedge knights or volunteers (like bastards), and protect the small people of Westeros, like hunting down Gregor Clegane and Ramsay Snow, maybe even going after Baelish if a bounty was put on him. Think of the group like the Rangers of the North/Rangers of Ithilien from Tolkien's universe, military groups who protect the people and land.

Well, that's all I got. I don't really know how the story would deal with the Others, unless you omit them and only have Wildlings be the threat beyond the Wall.

I love your storie! Thank you very much for writing it! It’s one of my favourite!

nice ending

Brilliant end to your story

Fantastic story, even if Varys behaviour seems a bit OOC.

That was a great story I am sad to see it come to an end great job

loved this story thank you so much for sharing