Aw, Katalina is so sweet. She and Philyra make a fun pair since they're such opposites

Poor Selene, I hope her magic goes back to normal soon

I know how difficult it is. It's been hard working on my own stories, but reading yours always pushes me to work on mine.
It doesn't seem dull at all! Your third-person writing is really good, especially considering how difficult it must be to go from your normal first-person style to third-person. I for one think it's going really well!

It's cool that Klaus is being careful to be more gentle when he interacts with Philyra. Normally he's kind of brusque, so it's sweet how he's being so conscious of her situation

Lol, I can't wait to see how Selene reacts when she finds out Elias and Katalina are dating

Aw, it's cute how Philyra and Yukiya have an almost automatic understanding of each other

I always love a snarky sidekick!

Halflings seem really neat. Will there be more later?

Aw, Philyra is so sweet. I'm glad that she's finally found a loving family

Aw, Philyra's so sweet, and a snarky familiar is a great balance

I'm looking forward to more chapters!

Please update I really want to see philyra and yukiya

That sounds like a neat idea!

Ha, those two quickly adapted to their new life as a couple!

So, is this part of the reason Vincent goes to the academy? To keep an eye on the trio?

Yay! Philyra's going to have a loving family!

Aw, Lyra, you poor cinnamon roll...

Poor Aless! Geez, these kids can't catch a break, can they?

I'm glad that they're safe (for now at least)

I can't wait for Philyra and Yukiya to meet. I sense a lot of puppy love. Ha, matchmaker Selene!

I think I like Klaus ad Selene's interactions more than the original MC and Klaus. They seem more like equals (if that makes sense) but Klaus is still like the canon character.
Besides, Selene's so funny, lol

The castle seems so cool!

Philyra is a cinnamon roll that must be protected!

Damn. That jumped up, like, five levels. Selene the bad ass... and Celeste... and Angel...
... Selestegel?

Things are about to get even MORE interesting.

Wow, Selene makes one scary crazy lady!

By the way, when Selene talks about being a 21st century woman, it says "I retorted"

Yay! Klaus to the rescue! Or rather, to help Selene's escape

I wish we could have learned more about Tigress before she died, she seems so interesting.

Poor Selene, that's pretty awful to have such a burden. I like how tough she is about it, though.

I can't wait for Klaus to beat up Jerkwad! Or Selene! Or Both! ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ

I can't wait for these two to escape!

Wow... I hope things get better for Philyra soon...

Stores of magic? That sounds like it's gonna be bad. I hope Selene and her team can prevent a war from happening!

Are they trying to destroy another dimensions?
Other Dimension thingy are awesomsauce.
I love the first few lines you added to the story.
Pretty to sum up. Can you tell me about those creeps name mentioned here?

Not good... I hope Philyra will be okay. Well, at least she is with Selene now so she would be with the safest person so far. I can't wait till you post another chapter in two weeks! : )

Ah Philyra.
I just can feel how she feels.
I'm looking forward to her and Yukiya's Chemistry.
Both the persons think Magic is a curse to them but each with a different story.
Hmm I'm gonna see their story soon.
I can't wait Fonix, Please next chappie.
I love Philyra's character.