Reviews for Legend of the Kitsune |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am really hoping that Orochimaru doesn't do anything too bad to naruto, mostly just ending up making observations and doing some blood and charka work as I see him as observing naruto's growth would be a far greater benefit then doing his typical style of experimentation would result in. I also believe that he may even realize who naruto's mother is and would debate in warning her about how bat shit crazy her husband has become. Though I don't see this happening any time soon if at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am enjoying this story alot. When do you think you will update this story? It is an interesting read and I want to know what happens next. Please update this story soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't mind Minato not loving Naruto out of the bat, but the hatred is OOC. Minato never had a reason to hate Kurama. He wasn't alive when Madara attacked Konoha for the first time, and since then all he knew about Kyuubi, is that he's sealed, and can't do much about it. He could be wary, cautious, maybe even fearful, but never hateful. You could argue that he thinks that this isn't his son, but even then, coldness and detachment would be more plausible. Instead of planning assassination, he would plan containment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That last line! This is something I was looking some quite time now. Just please, please, PLEASE don't fuck this up! ...and update as frequently as possible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is so seriously indepth thought you've already put into this. I find myself really wanting to know Orochimaru's reaction when he first gets alook at his special test subject' and how exactly he will feel about it. I know he'd be somewhat giddy at seeing the results of one of his theories, but to know what the Hokage wanted for his own child? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have to say, was slightly confused at the beginning of the chapter until the reason of why he returned after being banished. But, this whole idea of yours is quite unique, and I really like the in depth characters of the story, along with team 9's thought process as a whole. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alright that was great. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() Great work once again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol some traits can't be helped. At least he won't have issues with his body rejecting bijuu chakra. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Give me more fox boy moments. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter. Really interested to see what direction you will be taking this story. Chapter lengths, whatever this and the previous chapter were are good lengths. Keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() I think having a long blackout phase probably wouldn't just be a temporary setback. Please read up on Critical Period Hypothesis if you haven't already. Maybe also read up on other similar topics (that probably overlap with each other) like human development and about types of learning (at the very least, perceptual learning). If you have read all those things, but not read them recently, refreshing your memory on them might be a good idea. |
![]() ![]() Great work on this chapter. Cool concept. Keep it up! |