I'm done. Gary Stu with cringey dialogue who spews corny lines left and right to any female that would normally earn him a slap yet every girl acts thirsty in front of him. Hard pass

And now Blake's hooked on Jaune too.

Wow this was just amazing keep up the great writing

Story is lit af now reading the void swordsman

To Suck my Magnum Dong: YOU ARE A PIECE OF SHIT REVIEWER. Spam bombing because you don’t like a story? How gutless can you be? Yeah that’s right you’re gutless and a pussy as well. I’d like to see you try and write a good story... unless you’re too gutless to even try. So don’t be rude and don’t be a dick. Goodbye... you gutless dick.

To the reviewer above me: you are a dumb asshole and you better shut the hell up kid

Wind cutter is spelled kazegiri or kazekiri

The plot, and relationships, thicken!

dudeeeeee this epilogue style was sooo frekking awesomeeeeeeeee

loved it onto the void!

more Narutoverse with Kuro and Shiro.

Kuro obviously has something similar to a Sharingan. He is arrogent and black hair plus he uses a chokuto like Sasuke? lol

and Shiro is reminicent of a Hyuuga or more specifically Kaguya Ootsutsuki.(Silver hair and byakugan-esk eyes)
along with a taijutsu style that utilizes aura strikeslove it.

And now it begins. Nice.

This sets up the ending, doesn't it? Nice actually, love that.

its confirmed lol

Storm release with Lasers. definitely based in the Narutoverse element theory.

love everything in this story just figured I would drop another comment before I continue my binge