Nice! ;)

LOVED! Gave me shivers ;)

Wonderfully well-written! You did a great job describing the joy and anguish these two would have felt, knowing they were both probably going to die, but finding something beautiful together. This was just what I was looking for!

Pretty much what I imagined happened too.

I thought it was great! The paragraphs starting with "move" until three from the end were genius.

Very nice and deliciously sexy! Thanks for writing and sharing. :)

-Shani

Yaaaass! Brilliant writing and fantastic steamy session.

so much satisfaction!

Lovely! Hope you find a "fix-it" way for them to have more after Scariff...

I LOVED IT WOW. So good but so sad too, there at the end... well done!

What I think? Ahhhhhhh amazing! You can soooo feel the sexual tension between these two towards end of the movie! Theres always " what if... " running through my head after watching the movie.
Thank you for the story :)

Exactly what I envisioned!

Love your story! But it feels like a beginning not an end ;D Pleaaaaaase