Wonderful story ,it has my complete interest !just wanted to say that a part of the 13th chapter ,where ur explaining the brahmastra ,etc ,you got the info a little wrong ... The brahmastra is considered to be a nuclear weapon and it's wielder unbeatable , And it wasnt made during the mahabharata ,it was made millenias prior .Not saying your thesis was wrong ,just saying the actual fact :)

I fell in love with your last flash story, as well as most of your a song of ice and fire stories, so i have high hopes for this one. Look forward to read it :-D

You're back! So excited to watch this story unfold!