I do hope you continue this story in this time since I do find it interesting. And you have Rico down for the character part. And besides good writing though and I really want to find out what happens now.
And if not well, this is another dead fic.
First time reading your writing though, and it is good.
So cheers so far author.

Interesting concept but I can't help but feel that it pales in comparison to your previous works. Then again, this is just Chapter 1 and I attribute my lack of intrigue to my not being familiar with the Just Cause franchise. Keep it up! Who knows? Maybe I might get myself into Just Cause as the story progresses.