Reviews for Moving on without him |
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Gerni chapter 2 . 6/28 This is so sad its really good you did ashs traits really well always waiting to make sure his friends and family are safe along with always bring out the best in everyone |
jungleboy69 chapter 7 . 10/6/2019 Please update! The suspense is killing me! |
PokeZeldaFan chapter 1 . 8/26/2019 update update ples |
Im The Person chapter 7 . 8/22/2018 Ash probably found out he was having kids and got the f*ck out of dodge! |
Lucario-fighter chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 Update soon? |
Sophocles x Lana chapter 7 . 4/23/2018 You wanna know something I specifically searched for Sophocles x Lana fan fiction and I end up getting this bullshit why the fuck would it show me ash x Lana x Lillie x mallow fan fiction when I searched for Sophocles x Lana fan fiction also you said something about a tournament well where the fuck was that and why is ash the father of four kids from different families here’s what you shoulda done: none of the girls were going to have kids and they weren’t in love with ash but Serena did learn that ash was in alola and decided to visit him only to discover that he’s dead but then another ultra wormhole appears and one of the ultra beasts is about to kill Lana but then Sophocles saves her life by catching the ultra beast with a master ball and the two fall in love but the only way to stop the invasion is to destroy the ultra space core but whoever did would die so Serena sacrifices herself meaning that she could be with ash and the ultra attack is gone for good and everyone celebrates so then 5 years later it is the wedding of Sophocles and Lana so then 2 years later Kukui finds out that if all of the legendary and mythical Pokémon combine their powers then they could revive ash but they would also need an ultra beast which are now all extinct but then Sophocles remembers that he caught an ultra beast when he saved Lana, who now have a 1 year old son named Leo and thus ash, Serena, and everyone who had died was revived and then ash proposes to Serena the end. That’s what you should’ve fucking done PS I am a family friendly child and you made me do this that’s how bad this fanfic is |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/7/2018 Please update |
cmstar chapter 2 . 11/17/2017 This story was too great it made me cry |
stormsyaf chapter 7 . 11/7/2017 good story. good grammar too. hope you continue this story. got a lot potential. |
Rwbyknight chapter 7 . 11/2/2017 Are you going to list who's the oldest |
han00reborn chapter 7 . 9/8/2017 Awesome! Great story and good job! Please update soon! |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/22/2017 Nice Job! It's interesting, tragic and goes through a rollercoaster of emotions. Please update soon! |
1995hzq chapter 7 . 7/18/2017 No harm done. Glad to have you back. |
1995hzq chapter 7 . 7/18/2017 No harm done. Good to see you back. |
koszegi.andris chapter 7 . 7/19/2017 Now they'll only need one more important item/Pokemon and it's Ash's old Rotomdex and they couldn't leave to this journey without a useful companion like Rotomdex plus it could be a unique thing in the Kanto region. I also hope that some old characters will pop up soon. |