Reviews for Within Arm's Reach
The Professor of Fixing Things chapter 1 . 1/5/2018
First of all, I really love how you made Ruby assault her sister with questions about her new arm, it was absolutely adorable. I can imagine that Yang would probably un-attach her new arm from time to time and let her little sister figure out how it works so that she can mod it and maybe repair it on occasion. Maybe even help her make a new right half of Ember Celica.

I think it's very interesting how you made Ruby meet Raven. I'm neither opposed nor against them meeting in this fic, but I must say that I think it was a bit odd since she doesn't have a very close relationship with her family at all, but that's just my opinion. And besides, I don't think we knew if Qrow was going to live or not at the time that this fic was written (but I'd have to double-check the dates to be sure), so with that in mind, it was a very unique and imaginative way of ensuring our favorite DrUncle's survival. And for that, I thank you. :-)

I absolutely love the heartfelt talk between the two sisters. In trying situations like the one's they were and still are going through, a good talk, a good cry, and a good hug can help you feel a whole lot better.

When you spoke of Ruby suddenly having "the fate of the world on her shoulders" and how Yang was strong enough to help her with that burden, it reminded me of a part from scene from near the end of The Lord of the Rings (don't worry, no spoilers) when Sam said to Frodo considering the burden of the ring, "I can't carry it for you, but I can carry you."

All-in-all, this fic was so sweet and I absolutely loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us and keep up the great work!
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Derrick-Skalula chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
"hey yang. is it ok if I add some guns to your arm?" Ruby says as she gives her big sister her patented puppy dog eyed look.
DaPokemonMadster chapter 1 . 1/9/2017
Oh man, this is one of those reunions I want to see the most. I think it's going to absolutely crush me. This was super heart-warming and very much full of feels at the same time, and thank you so much for writing it! It was a great follow up to your Yang and Blake reunion, and I'm really glad you had Ruby meet Raven. I mean, I'm sure that's going to happen sooner or later, and I also am of the same mindset that Raven's gonna save Qrow. I can't help but point out and admire once more your dedication to keeping them in character, especially Yang. The way you write her is just SO perfect, I don't even have words for it! Thanks much for this, I really needed it! :D