Reviews for Orange |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You were right. I liked 'Orange' deffo weird without Mikey lol I was worried at first that I might need to catch up on the latest versions of TMNT as there's so many different ones. Thankfully a catch up wasn't needed. I'll try the brother who waited next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww Mikey! This was a lovely ending and I loved it being in Mikey's P.O.V (something I need to work on in my own writing) yet again another lovely end to a story so now its time for me to drop my smokebomb and jump out the window! *drops smokebomb and you can hear glass shattering* |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was SO GOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Over already? Aw man...happy ending though :) Hey, Mikey, you still gonna eat that pizza? Kinda hungry here |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kinda guessed right. This was so awesome can't wait for more Ninja! Also I love the fact that Mikey's broken hearted... that sounds dead bad! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 0.0 ...mind blown (brain literally explodes) ...I'm okay |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you said you aren't going to tell us but, I have a theory too: maybe this is when Leo was at the farm house at well in a 3 month coma. Well even though I might be wrong I can't wait to read more. Awesome, amazing job. Have fun writing ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think my theory from last chapter is still right. I loved this alot it was so awesome and I liked seeing the interaction. I really think that Leo's in a coma but he can hear the voices of his brothers and in this coma and he's in an alternate universe where Mikey doesn't exist because Mikey has something to do with the reason he's in a coma! Keep it up Ninja! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Leo...his devotion to Mikey is both heartwarming and heartbreaking |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome I wonder what is going to happen next. You are an AAMMAAZZIINNGG Amazing Writer |
![]() ![]() Wow! This is amazing. It's been a long time since a fanfic got my attention this way and I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, I am questioning Leo's sanity. Of course I'll give you reviews and love :) Here's a bucket of water in case of flames |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait... I get it. This is an alternate universe where Mikey doesn't exist and in the universe where Mikey does exist he kinda has a mental connection with this Leo. I think thats it anyway... awesome chapter it was nice to see Mikey! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it possible that leo is knocked out in the real world, and in a different dimension where mikey doesn't exist? |