Interesting story. I'd like to read more.

Very long time i see you update deponia fic. COVID 19 kinda screw our life huh.

I really like the story building you have done so far. It all reads really well!

I hate Divius! How dare he do this to little Cletus. Poor Arron, not only did he lose his mother but his older brother.

Oh no! Poor sweetie! I can't wait to see where you take this!

The first chapter and you already have me hooked! I'm very interested to see where this story is going!

Hi! I haven't read your fanfiction yet since I'm still playing Deponia, but I just wanted to tell you that I'm really looking forward to it! Sadly there's only your fanfic on .. such a pity, Deponia is a great gameI'll be sure to comment again as soon as I finish all of the games and read a few chapter of your story!

Another great chapter! Cletus is slowly making his way up into higher circles. I'm eager to see what happens next!

Another good chapter! I feel bad for Cletus in regards to his hair and his feelings for his mother. Even bad guys love their mothers. I have to wonder how Cletus would have turned out if she had lived. And in that regard, Rufus as well. Aparantly he had a mother too (a foster mother along with Seagull). But she died. It was mentioned in a split second in the third game. Anyway, I have to wonder how Rufus would have turned out if she had lived. But I digress... Looking forward to another chapter!

Ahhh... Classic German writer.

Cletus? That good. I always wonder... what happens to him.

What about rufus? he sacrificed his life for people of deponia? What about his ex? what will she think. I remember reading on russian fanfiction about her and rufus.

This chapter was really good. Divius is so cold-hearted too. I feel really bad for Cletus, but at the same time, he also has a streak of cold-heartedness. I'm looking forward to reading more!

This is a very nicely written story so far. And since I have a genuine interest in many of the Deponia characters, not just Rufus and Goal, this story is very interesting to me. I never really considered that since Cletus was a clone, how he came to be the important figure he was. I do hope you cover how you think Rufus came to live in Kuvaq as well, since he came from the same "stock" so to speak. Even if it's just a mention, since this story is centering around Cletus.

I do have one question. Why green hair for Cletus? Looking back at the game, his hair looks pretty brown to me. Just curious.

I do hope you'll be continuing this story! I'd love to read more!