Reviews for The Neutron-Vortex Rules for a Successful and Healthy Relationship
Joe Stoppinghem chapter 23 . 7/25
As always your writing is above the crowd.
Been with you on this since book one of the arc.

Planning to enjoy more of your work down the road.
AshPli chapter 23 . 7/2
A really nice way to write a proper conversations about a reconciling Couple. Really enjoyed it.
BeaRizy chapter 23 . 6/29
I just noticed I wrote my review for this chapter in the first chapter haha, please nevermind that and consider it as a review for this chapter
Joe Stoppinghem chapter 22 . 6/28
I am happy to be able to enjoy another chapter of your work and especially this story.

Can’t wait for the next chapter, these two just work so well together.
SaraTheKhaleesi chapter 23 . 6/28
OH FUCK. This shit was HOT.

You already know how much I've been waiting for the smut and let me tell you, as expected, it did not disappoint. Absolute amazing job. I loved LITERALLY every bit of it. I will definitely be reading that top part of the chapter again...

I'm so far the domestic Jimmy/Cindy. My god, even just the small little bits of dialoge like when he goes to make her a sandwich, and the cute banter back and forth. It's so refreshing to see again. I've missed them so much!

OMG the fucking panties. YES. Love that they were under the bed, classic. And love the Cindy handled that so well. I am so proud of her. She's really come so far from the girl in Rules 1 who would have literally THROWN DOWN. I love the character growth. So, so proud of her.

Love when they were talking about Libby's pregnancy and the sex of the baby (which, I am SO excited to find out! I think it's a boy, but I'm probs wrong) Also, love the little nod when Jimmy says he wouldn't be able to wait...please...please...I need them to have babies and get married. I need it in my life.

Amazing job well done. I am so so excited for whatever is next. Thank you for everything that you do!
Ogreking94 chapter 23 . 6/28
Nice! Keep up the great work!
anayeli12 chapter 23 . 6/27
Agree with the review below mine. Haha, excellent chapter.
BeaRizy chapter 1 . 6/27
Haha, this is the fastest update ever. I got shocked seeing the notification. Also, a great chapter again, I'm glad you explained what happened to them during their break up period.
Lovepeaceandwar chapter 22 . 6/5
I took a break from reading fanfiction for a while but I'm back! I was so far behind so I had to read all of this and the og story from the beginning to remember what was going on. I love this story. I love the characters. I love the way you write. The dynamic between these characters is so special and the evolution of their relationship really has been a joy to read. Thanks for writing.
jcforever19 chapter 22 . 6/3
This was absolutely great! I really liked it. Sorry I don't have a more substantive comment this week. Looking forward to the next installment!
AshPli chapter 22 . 6/3
I will say the flasbackception confused me but except that it was really fun read. First love relationships are for a lack of a better terms a weird feeling especially when it feels like it isn't working out. Also a really good consequence to lack of communication in Long distance relationships.
Privy Plebeian chapter 22 . 6/1
We love Carl
Privy Plebeian chapter 22 . 6/1
WOOOOOOFINALLYYYYYYYYYY thank you author
anayeli12 chapter 22 . 5/31
I was so happy to get this notification. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
lmsy92 chapter 22 . 5/30
AGAIN, CARL FOR THE WIN!
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