thank you so much for this! really very well written, i enjoyed it a lot! made my day less depressing for a bit, too... :)

I enjoyed reading this, thank you very much for sharing!

Brilliant, this was a pleasure to read. I love all of it. The book’s interesting, the messages, Harry and Snape’s personnalities, and Albus Severus’ too! Ron, Hermione and Ginny were so cool, and wow, this was really sweet! Thank you for sharing this

Harper PettyHarry Potter
Shaun StapletonSeverus Snape

wow... I'm in need of a cold shower and lots of chocolate after this amazing ride..

I love how on A03 that this story is quite well known and liked along with The Side Effects of Potion No.9. These are truly my favourites and if you ever read this then please keep writing!

You know, I've read all of your stories, and loved them. They always left me with a smile in the end, they were so sweet and beautiful. Especially Draught No 9, that one was especially sweet. But this one... Snape here was creepy and stalkerish. I mean, he wrote an erotic book that practically had Harry as the starring role (and anyone would feel violated at that), and then he forced Harry to relive a sex scene of said book. I can't understand how Harry is so acceptingNo matter that he basically violated my privacy or forced me to relive a sex scene I didn't exactly consent to, he was just doing what was best for me and I love him". Blergh. And the Harry "needing a man"... I loved all your other stories, read them all. But I have to say, even though this was very well written, this was my least favorite. I just can't understand why Harry isn't more angry at the blatant manipulation.

Oh my wow loved it lol

Loved it! Wonderful characterizations, a beautiful slow build and very hot at the end. A fantastic read :) Thank you!
~Lyca

Loved it but wish there was more...

This is a good read. I must have skimmed over this story for months before I actually dove in to it. And once I did, I couldn't put it down. No surprise really once I saw your other stories. I love your stories and your writing. Do you accept ideas? I have some but I'm pants at writing. Lol anyways, good job on this story, looking forward to more stories from you.

This was brilliant! How is it more people have not commented?! the plot was very well thought out, I loved the tricks and traps, and I'm a sucker for fluffy happy endings. My only suggestion would be to break this into chapters. Starting this story yesterday, reading this morning and lunch, then finishing it tonight caused a lot of starting and stopping and searching for the last place I left off (my phone kept resetting to the top of the story!) Again, I'm so happy to find this gem! You are a wonderful talent!

That was awesome!

Thank your for the read

Oh wow, this was amazing. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Thx for sharing your wonderful ideas.