Reviews for Save the Saviour |
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stacyleedam25 chapter 13 . 12/6/2019 Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next |
Blackjack Emrys chapter 13 . 10/11/2018 This is so cute please write more |
sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 8 . 5/10/2018 the plot is promising but it goes waaaaaaay too fast. it is so rushed that it doesn't even make sense. |
sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 1 . 5/10/2018 you wrote epilogue instead of prologue in the first chapter |
Lokilaufeysonstoes chapter 1 . 12/13/2017 Add. More. |
JohnLockSher chapter 13 . 9/5/2017 still NEED more |
Love Faith Embers chapter 13 . 6/23/2017 Great story so far! I can't wait to see/read what happens next! :D |
mandancie chapter 13 . 6/22/2017 A very intriguing story! I can't wait to see what happens next. |
KilometersbutAmerican chapter 13 . 6/14/2017 Please update your staory, im lovin it zo far. |
Guest chapter 13 . 5/20/2017 I'm extremely enjoying this |
celticwitch77 chapter 13 . 5/3/2017 Hope you finish |
zoeshadow chapter 9 . 4/29/2017 I love this story but I'm confused. For the line that is 'No. contrary to popular belief' Did you mean to write 'Now' instead of no? |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2017 1. Why is the epilogue at the beginning of your story? It should be called the 'prologue.' 2. Much of your punctuation is incorrect. 3. Your 'over the top' idea of child abuse is ridiculous and unrealistic. 4. Your writing style is cumbersome and clunky. Try cutting out the useless verbage. Streamline it, making it direct and to the point. |
ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 13 . 4/21/2017 Oh shit at least he is ok and protected |
KilometersbutAmerican chapter 13 . 4/21/2017 this chapter, it made me want to jump into this story just to kill Dumbles. |