Reviews for Save the Saviour
stacyleedam25 chapter 13 . 12/6/2019
Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next
Blackjack Emrys chapter 13 . 10/11/2018
This is so cute please write more
sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 8 . 5/10/2018
the plot is promising but it goes waaaaaaay too fast. it is so rushed that it doesn't even make sense.
sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
you wrote epilogue instead of prologue in the first chapter
Lokilaufeysonstoes chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
Add. More.
JohnLockSher chapter 13 . 9/5/2017
still NEED more
Love Faith Embers chapter 13 . 6/23/2017
Great story so far! I can't wait to see/read what happens next! :D
mandancie chapter 13 . 6/22/2017
A very intriguing story! I can't wait to see what happens next.
KilometersbutAmerican chapter 13 . 6/14/2017
Please update your staory, im lovin it zo far.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/20/2017
I'm extremely enjoying this
celticwitch77 chapter 13 . 5/3/2017
Hope you finish
zoeshadow chapter 9 . 4/29/2017
I love this story but I'm confused. For the line that is 'No. contrary to popular belief' Did you mean to write 'Now' instead of no?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2017
1. Why is the epilogue at the beginning of your story? It should be called the 'prologue.'

2. Much of your punctuation is incorrect.

3. Your 'over the top' idea of child abuse is ridiculous and unrealistic.

4. Your writing style is cumbersome and clunky. Try cutting out the useless verbage. Streamline it, making it direct and to the point.
ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 13 . 4/21/2017
Oh shit at least he is ok and protected
KilometersbutAmerican chapter 13 . 4/21/2017
this chapter, it made me want to jump into this story just to kill Dumbles.
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