Reviews for Not Alone |
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GHHRHHRHRH chapter 4 . 2/2/2019 YOUR STORY SUX! U ARE NOT A GOOD WRITER AT ALL! THIS WHOLE THING SUX BALLS! GET A LIFE HOMO! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2018 This story was supposed to be a joke, right? It really makes me loose my faith in human race for one of our owns to write something so cringey. Whatever the case maybe, never plan on becomming an author |
Sergeant Daniel chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 Your story sux BALLS! |
dragon5dragonblitz8 chapter 1 . 2/17/2018 Please update |
Emily Ann Marie Valhalla Swan chapter 4 . 12/5/2017 please update |
merniizztat chapter 4 . 11/9/2017 update please... |
the Major's Captain chapter 4 . 1/22/2017 continue story |
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 4 . 1/14/2017 Well done |
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 3 . 1/14/2017 Wow what is next |
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 2 . 1/14/2017 Wow |
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 1 . 1/14/2017 Awesome start I love it. |
Annomynous chapter 4 . 1/14/2017 Love the story man, I hope jane will make an appearance sooner then later. Also what's up with the endings are they speaking from the future? |
Ajax-Francis chapter 4 . 1/13/2017 I like the concept but you seem to push some of the spots like the bank and the car dealership and i feel you should have someone help you with the dialogue between characters |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2017 Futa- porn story... nope, dick girl bleh. Act as animal ... Yes pee all over a tree like a dog... Esme ? Bella with her vamp mom? Jane? the hard core bitch who hurt everyone? Alice her vamp sister? nooo |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/30/2016 This story is so awesome, I can't wait for the next update! |