Reviews for Not Alone
GHHRHHRHRH chapter 4 . 2/2/2019
YOUR STORY SUX! U ARE NOT A GOOD WRITER AT ALL! THIS WHOLE THING SUX BALLS! GET A LIFE HOMO!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
This story was supposed to be a joke, right? It really makes me loose my faith in human race for one of our owns to write something so cringey. Whatever the case maybe, never plan on becomming an author
Sergeant Daniel chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Your story sux BALLS!
dragon5dragonblitz8 chapter 1 . 2/17/2018
Please update
Emily Ann Marie Valhalla Swan chapter 4 . 12/5/2017
please update
merniizztat chapter 4 . 11/9/2017
update please...
the Major's Captain chapter 4 . 1/22/2017
continue story
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 4 . 1/14/2017
Well done
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 3 . 1/14/2017
Wow what is next
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 2 . 1/14/2017
Wow
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 1 . 1/14/2017
Awesome start I love it.
Annomynous chapter 4 . 1/14/2017
Love the story man, I hope jane will make an appearance sooner then later. Also what's up with the endings are they speaking from the future?
Ajax-Francis chapter 4 . 1/13/2017
I like the concept but you seem to push some of the spots like the bank and the car dealership and i feel you should have someone help you with the dialogue between characters
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2017
Futa- porn story... nope, dick girl bleh. Act as animal ... Yes pee all over a tree like a dog...
Esme ? Bella with her vamp mom? Jane? the hard core bitch who hurt everyone? Alice her vamp sister? nooo
Guest chapter 3 . 12/30/2016
This story is so awesome, I can't wait for the next update!
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