I really liked this expansion of the scene from Beyond.

I think this third time of reading this story, I have forgotten just how real you make it. How clear and real the characters are. I hope you think about doing some more short stories or in fact longer ones!

So I am loving this one all over again! I can't wait for more from you!

I love this tag to Beyond. I really enjoyed the expanded lounge scene. Of course, Bones would know something was off with Jim. ;) Thank you for sharing this story, I'm eager to read more from you!

Fits perfect into the gap of the film. can't wait for your new story!

Fabulous! I can't believe I have only just seen this! I have been hoping that you will be pubisling soon! Can't wait for the next story from you in Jan!

I think this was a really good take on these to scenes! I love your interaction with Bones and Jim, something I really missed in the film!

As always thank you for sharing and please don't leave us hanging for too much longer!

PH

This was fun, but I feel like most of it was repeating what was said in the movie. I think, if I were to give you one suggestion, it would be to cut back on the repeating and add to the original stuff. The story could have used some line breaks to show that time had passed or something too. It was pretty good in all though! I liked seeing the thoughts behind what was said, and the added stuff was pretty cool. I especially like how you showed Jim's weariness. It almost feels like depression or something.

Thank you again for your perfect story telling. Beyond seems to be a hard movie to find loop holes and I also struggle to like it. The more I appreciate what you found and how you filled that scene, that could have been much more intense in the movie. Glad, you did it. Thanks again for sharing, tin

Awwww, this is great. Lots of feels. Very satisfying! So excited to hear you have a new story for us! Merry Christmas!

I really enjoyed this. Thank you.

I loved the one shot :) Thank youuuu !

I won't say I loved Beyond either, though I appreciate what it did for the characters. I further appreciate what *you* do for the characters. This feels so right for this Jim and Bones in this universe, and yet carries something of the TOS characters too. Thank you as always for sharing your ideas and talents.

Amazing! Thanks for this! So good to hear from you, and to hear more is on the way. I love your characterizations! Merry Christmas

This was well written. I especially liked the "I'm worried about you." line; I can definitely hear Bones saying that. You have a great voice for the characters, and this falls in very nicely with the movie. Which, by the way, I loved. It felt more like an Original Series episode, but on a very high budget. I really enjoy the interactions between the characters the most (it's what makes Star Trek so memorable, in my opinion), and I enjoyed this one-shot. Great job! :)

I've been waiting for more of your stories since the movie came out! So glad to read one for my bday! Thanks for the bday present!