A much better finale than the that aired. You are quite the wordsmith!

Better than the original ending of 3. Bravo!

I wished it could have went this way. Nice!

That was beautiful.
And I know, right? I keep wondering why the writers didn't go this route, or something similar, with Crane giving half of his soul to defeat Pandora. 1/2 plus 1/2 still equals 1.
Well done.

I'm always down for fix it fics!

This right here is what my heart has been starving over. Everything was perfect my soul is smiling but reality is punching me violently known no that this wasn't his w s3 ended. But for now. I'll be replacing that painful memory with this work of art.

aww how cute.

Um, yes. I so so so so so wish this is what happened. I'm going to pretend that it is. Then ending was just perfect - you had everyone's voice down, Jenny's comments, Crane finally being honest. Yes. Perfect.

This is the perfect fix. If only.

Ugh, exactly how it should've been. Thank you for such a rational, plausible, Ichabbie fix-it.

This was simply beautiful! I love your writing! Thank you for this!

Fantastic fix it and wonderfully done. Definitely what I wish had happened instead of what we got.

I wish that you could have written the finale! Your take was creative and suspenseful. Great job!

Perfect