Great start on a story. I wish there had been more to it.

I like this story. Espescially Severus brother - Nikolai Please continue this ;)

you know what? I do believe that a good writer should not need to tell us whose point of view they are writing from. It ought to be made clear with the context (as it is in your story, so you should not add bad subtitles like "X's pov").

this is very interesting. I would like to know more about Nikolai though, he is new and I wonder if Lily knew him.

wow sev has a brother cool