this was a great chapter, good job.

All that hype and training for this shit? I'm done with this story.

so while SnowAngel was harsh in turning down jaune i dnt think its right to bash her like ths its kinda petty.i mean yang caused alot of property damages,blakes shady past isnt a thing to be overlooked Jaune being all bitter towards weiss makes him a sore loser,plain n simple...

Ruby, Pyrrha and Blake want the D

Fuckin thought it was gonna be kill yourself by no burnham

This was a really interesting concept. Is there a chance to get more of this?

How do you go from getting Yamcha'd to living. What bullshit are you getting at. Also, how could have Weiss been hard on rejecting Jaune, all you had her say is "Then no.", get your stuff together.

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great omake

Glorious, absolutely glorious. Though the omake I say has to have been the best part of it all. Though I do like me some WeissxJaune. So basically: My man!

Man, I really like the time stopping ability of Jaune here. Though a tad different from what I first expected, it was a good read.

What is this chapter? I am so confused

I hate time skips!

Can we get a finish to the first few chapters. I kind of want to know what happens after jaune and folks get back after he had a hole put in his chest. I love the story and i love the little short stories the pilot one was great but. Please give us a finished story for the first one.

I just found this story and read it in one go, i gotta say this is a really great story! My favorite is The knight returns and Aural fortification. Anyway great job! Keep being awesome, i hope ypu will update again soon! and preferably the knight returns, and happy new year 2018!

Jaune mató a Cinder?