loved this!

I know that song reference from a different fic XD

I for one, eagerly await your return!

What is with Cinder

I... I actually this story strangely enough. And I'm not ashamed to say it, I find this idea kinda interesting to be perfectly honest and I hope to see more

I really don't like that first story. Gold in the Rough.

Sounds boring as hell. Don't do that one. Real life AUs are terrible. Do fantasy AUs like a medieval fantasy comedy

or even a pirate AU or a Disney AU or hell even just stories about them getting into shennanegans at school.

Why discontinue? this is great? If anything you probably just need better planning.

And a schedule. Everything is always better with a Schedule. You need to create a writing Schedule where you have a specific day to upload each chapter of a new story.

Thats what will keep people coming back to your channel. and you want them to keep coming back because you are in fact a great writer.

LOVE all your upcoming jaune stories btw. But you just don't have enough Jaune x Ruby stories. You're lacking in Lancaster sir. I suggest you fix this. Please and thanx.

This is a really good book and it’s unique as well never thought I’d see a shy or nervous cinder

You painted a very good picture in this chapter, love the way it was exicuted if a tiny bit dragged out between Weiss and ruby. Can’t waot to see how you go about rewriting the first couple of chapters

hope you update soon we'll be waiting

Schiesse? Don't you mean...Schniesse? Kill me Yang. Anyways, surprise surprise! You're back! This story is back! Aaand you're gone. Your AU at the end kinda contradicts itself, ya knoooow? I mean, you say you won't update any further. Then you say you'll continue it once you believe that your writing is up to par to your standards. So...there IS a chance in you updating this once more. Albeit being miniscule. But yeah, your standards must be God-Tier if you think the writing in your story isn't as good as you think it is.

Back to the story at hand, really glad to see Chibi-Cinder back at it again with her cute shenanigans. Kinda surprised though at the lack of Cinder in this chapter. Especially at the second half. Most of it was starring Jaune and the filthy THO- er lewd maid who apparently isn't Salem(there goes that theory). With all the moves that maid is making on Jaune, I'm also surprised that the actions in itself hasn't attracted the attention of almost everyone in that place. And I'm not talking about Teams RWBY and NPR along with Minty and Leggy. Perhaps that's a common thing for a maid like Mon Chéri to do to her customers? Makes me wonder what's going on in Cinder's head as the maid hugged, kissed, dEfILEd...her future husbando. Her ability to restrain herself from burning that maid from the inside out is fascinating if not impressive in itself. Also loved what you did at the end with Emerald. The small details of her feeling 'satisfaction' was masterfully done. Especially when little to no dialogue was ever exchanged between Minty/Leggy and their maid. LONG AF review aside, good to know this story still live(s/d).

Take your time friend, the readers who came here for the story will be waiting for your return with open arms. I look forward to the next up data. A dedicated reader.

Just finished reading this amazing fan fiction. Hope all the chapters meet your standards soon!

I recognize those first few lyrics of the song Nora was singing they are from the story jaunes video diaries because it is the song that he writes for Nora to sing about her feelings for ren cuz the rest that line is when I want to say I love you I say boop

It seems like cinder is a cross between a mayadere and yandere