Reviews for Near Miss |
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top story chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 I love these two |
fictionfrek101 chapter 1 . 1/3/2017 This was so good, and I lost it over that last line. I love how you were able to make Newt not seem like he was overreacting or possessive or wrong about the situation. It's not an easy thing to admit, but Tina did need to remove herself from the situation, and you did that without villianizing either her or Newt. Great job. |
Tarja Holopainen chapter 1 . 12/21/2016 AWWWWWW ! *-* |
Angiee chapter 1 . 12/17/2016 Newt concerned about his wife and baby it's so touching and no doubt he'll be a good father and husband. I like it a lot your fic. I hope you can continue after baby's birthing |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2016 How adorable! So well written! Thank you :) |
kingdomfictionalia chapter 1 . 12/10/2016 Sweet and very realistic for soon to be parents. I laughed at the end tho, if Newt was to refer to them as creatures or beasts just imagine what Tina would have done besides locking him up. Anyways, I really loved this story of yours and if you still want to add some chapters into this, keep going. |
Smart Kira chapter 1 . 12/10/2016 A very nice story indeed my friend but hey another idea maybe write a fanfic where Newt constantly calls his and Tina's children 'creatures and/or beasts' after Tina has a bad day and decides to take matters into her own hands. Tell me what you think ok ;) |
Raven that flies at night chapter 1 . 12/10/2016 This is very adorable. Also first review. |