I wanted to thank you for writing and sharing this story. It was fun, and actually made me cry at the end, so good on you for successfully invoking emotions. I think the plot was well done. I don’t remember when this was posted, but I hope you’ve continued writing.

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I had a feeling you made him an obscurial.

Great story. Loved the concept. This is the first that I've seen done well. Anyways, keep up the great work, both IRL and in the fanfiction community!

Really well done and original. At least I have never seen a story quite like this one. Glad you had fun writing it, I did reading it. Kudos

Great story, I really loved it. I have an idea for a epilogue. Maybe it can have Harry find Newt’s briefcase and then he can continue to care for the magical creatures, because he did say he wanted to thank him in some way.

I still thinck it's harry doing it

I'm done. A story is nothing but convenient garbage when you don't take the time to establish motives. And since you haven't, I have no reason to view Harry's insistence on staying in the wizarding world as anything but conveinent garbage. It moves the plot along sure, but it doesn't create the kind of plot you actually want to bother reading.

Wtf? Why does he have to complete anything, he should be f*cking running. It makes no sense that the child who thought he was being hunted down would go straight into the f*cking lion's den. Are wizards dangerous? Did they kill the Dursleys? They know where I live? A voice keeps telling me to run? Whelp lets head STRAIGHT TO WHERE THEY LIVE! Because that makes sense for a scared 11-year-old...

This is amazing! You write really well, and the story was captivating, i thoroughly enjoyed it. thank you!

Great story, please continue it

Amazing story Adam! I don't get why it doesn't have more reviews...it really deserves way more appreciation! I'm glad you decided to write and share this beautiful and intense story :) the timing, the scense, the characters...all was so well done and very much believable considering JKR's canon! It was a rather satisfactory read... ;)
oh and much thanks to your girlfriend for luring you in the wonderful world of XD An author like you who can write quality stuff and have the commitment to end what they start is something we really need on this site XD

great story. haven't seen fantastic beasts yet, so I actually had to look up what an obscurus was. and I have to honestly say it makes alot of sense. so I was glad to be able to read it.

Excellent story.

A lot of people died. No, Harry isn't to blame, Dumbledore is for all he tried to hide it.