I really loved this story and thought it was written very well!

Really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it.

As others have mentioned, it was a bit weird to list as a oneshot when it is broken up into chapters with ANs included. It was a very good story that kept me interested. The characters felt so real and practically perfect. I like the build up that you had to the end, the struggle and plot of it all. Great job!

As good as this story was, it was a lot to read as a one shot - you should have split the chapters into actual chapters, especially as you've put summaries and A/N at the beginning of each one. (As a side note, the A/N for chapter 13 makes no sense, seeing as you apologize for a delay in posting)

This was such a good story!

That was hot and intense!

Very good! A bit intense with the zoo concept it kind of reminded me of a 'Twilight Zone' episode and I mean that in a good way, it was excellent and very creative :) and I like how the Doctor respects and fights for Rose. All in all well done! :))