Reviews for Instead of Kindness
Ava chapter 2 . 7/19
Shame that it looks like this story was abandoned. I really enjoyed your OC Kino. A female version of Sai is interesting. The idea of a quiet, socially clueless girl seems really cute and endearing. I think she is perfect for Sasuke.

I would have prefered Narusaku, but I also like Kakasaku as well. Just makes me frustrated that Sakura doesn't even consider Naruto romantically even though he was always there when Sasuke isn't.
omnipotent Porunga chapter 1 . 6/22
Ignore the last review please, I confused you with Tsume Yuki!
I am so. so, so sorry!
Please forgive me!
omnipotent Porunga chapter 23 . 6/22
Though I am usually a Sasu-Saku fan, I like the flow of this fic. Of course, I still like Poppy Evans more as an OC!
Looking forward to the next chapter of this fic, and requesting for another HP fic, if you can, with OC paired with Draco, please.
yamanakaflowers chapter 15 . 5/5
Aww, poor Ino. The previous bit which told of how she suddenly thought of her father after making out with Sai felt very Freudian, this chapter with her working hard to maintain the flower shop just further highlighted that feeling since the shop was the pride of the Yamanakas. But I like it, this dimension gives unique depth to Sai and Ino although they are just the side pairing here, so I really appreciate you for that, thank you so much!
yamankaflowers chapter 14 . 5/5
Omg hahaha I love the smut, I like that Sai was being the more eager one due his lack of experience while Ino was initially chill about it but gave in anyway xD
yamanakaflowers chapter 13 . 5/5
LOL at momma Ino always teaching the “good bad stuff” to Kino. I love the quip between Sai and Ino here, can’t wait to see how their “lesson” goes ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
yamanakaflowers chapter 7 . 5/4
Aww, this is so cute. Ino has always been the protective type, too bad not many fanfics explore this side of her and I’m glad that yours does. I usually don’t read fanfics with OC, but Kino is growing on me so I’m looking forward to see more of this story.
JasmineDragon22 chapter 23 . 5/2
What an invigorating story! At first I was a bit miffed that it wasn’t SasuSaku but your addition of Kino is very refreshing. I love the fact that she’s Sai’s sister and the fun nuances that come with it. I also love what you’re doing with KakaSaku. I don’t think I’ve read a fic with that ship that has addressed the age gap and Hokage addition. I also like the civilian rumors to it and the rebounding that’s happening and not happening at the same time. Well done. But my fav is SaiIno. Their development is my favorite.
TDI-Ryro-Eclares chapter 23 . 4/25
Update again soon please!
:)
abovej0y chapter 7 . 4/17
Re-reading this, man I love the way you portray everybody and how you describe things and that you've got some nihongo knowledge, truly love it, I feel like this is a luxurious dessert on my sasuoc palate, wish I could read more new content from you 3 sending you good vibes
Miku tQm chapter 1 . 4/15
I would like to know more about Kino's ninja abilities and such...
Miku tQm chapter 23 . 4/5
I freaking love this! Pls continue!
Guest chapter 23 . 4/1
.Thanks for the update! Hope to see another update.
Though there's another review(below mine) which is disgusting. Eww. Man! Is he/she high or smokin pot? Lolss
Girl in My Mirror Is Crying chapter 23 . 3/5
I leaned a butt cheek off the seat and farted. It was really warm and smelly. I farted again and I could feel my poo almost come out. I waited until I was at a stoplight and then I lifted my butt up off the seat and pushed. I had to strain a little at first, as it was hard to push the turd out against my tight briefs. I grunted and gave another push and completely filled my underwear with warm, soft dookie.
QUACK3RS chapter 23 . 2/12
Really interesting story and pairings!
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