Reviews for Dark Watch Rising
Bull-lock chapter 13 . 4/6/2019
No updates for this fanfic? Akame ga Kill is a dying series T_T
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Oh wait...It's already dead.
The Empress Over All chapter 1 . 1/28/2018
Interesting story, wish it could have improved grammar and some lines from the films just doesn't somewhat fit in. But overall nice story, I should catch up to this one
Guest chapter 13 . 11/11/2017
This is an interesting story. I hope you haven’t abandoned it. I’m curious to see where you are going with this. Other than some grammatical errors, I don’t see many issues with the story so far. I also have some suggestions. For one thing, I think you should kill off some more characters. It would add a sense of realism to the story, since there are always casualties of war. It also keeps readers more emotionally invested and interested in your story. It’s not as interesting when you know the character is going to survive, and the possibility of death makes your characters all the more human. Plus, the way you have paired these characters up would make it all the more tragic for one of them to die, and lead to a transformation in the survivor who has lost his or her significant other. How will it effect them? Will they be broken, unable to carry on the fight? Will it drive them to work harder than ever to achieve their goals? Or will they become consumed by hatred of their enemy, becoming obsessed with vengeance, perhaps even becoming a monster? All of these are interesting questions that would make for great plot points. I’d also recommend that you refrain from making the characters too different from what they were in the original story. Esdeath wasn’t really a character that could be redeemed. Yes, she was a product of the environment in which she was raised, but she was still a killer who enjoyed causing death and destruction. The Darwinian principles (survival of the fittest) which she with which she governs her actions are firmly engrained into her psyche to the point where she would never change her views. Even if she were to side with Rubious, he still wouldn’t be able to change her. I hope this was helpful!
Eternal4Ever chapter 13 . 6/2/2017
BOI What'cha talking about?! I read the last chapter! I just didn't have time to left a review
Kamen rider w chapter 13 . 5/31/2017
When are u gonna update because it has been a month already and I want to see what happens next
BloodyDemon666 chapter 13 . 4/28/2017
Dude, I had no idea that Rubious was a prince, but that was a great chapter and I like the chemistry between Esdeath and Rubious, I hope to see them get paired, also the part where they were fighting the danger beasts was the best part. Keep up the good work!
NEW AGE DRAGON chapter 13 . 4/27/2017
Very interesting XD
BloodyDemon666 chapter 12 . 4/26/2017
Hey dude, yet another chapter in the bag, and like I said the killing of the danger beast with the harpoon shotgun was the best part, I hope that there's more soon...keep up the good work.
NEW AGE DRAGON chapter 12 . 4/24/2017
OOoooohhhh Rubious, you in trouble now mate XDXD, epic chapter
BloodyDemon666 chapter 11 . 4/15/2017
I gotta say, the part where Chelsea changed into a panther kitten and changed back was my favorite part of this chapter, and I hope to see this go a good distance as well, and it gives me a great amount of inspiration to help me with AGK/BL crossover. Keep up the good work!
NEW AGE DRAGON chapter 11 . 4/15/2017
BANG! Epic chapter XDXDXD, Things gonna go well XDXDXD, amazing work G King XD
Drew Luczynski chapter 11 . 4/14/2017
Nice to see some of these ships starting to sail.

And in the case of Leone and Dundee it really sailed
Eternal4Ever chapter 11 . 4/14/2017
Romance beings now! By the way, stay alert for both Danganropa and AGK story boi
NEW AGE DRAGON chapter 10 . 3/25/2017
Great work as always G King! Now with the other two now being introduced XDXD, please dont let anything bad happen to them T_T
Eternal4Ever chapter 10 . 3/24/2017
Cliche back story, new weapons, serious fire power and smiling after the doctors appointment... What else do we need to make this a great chapter than now?
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