The Rainwalker, I was looking at one of your reviews about Dreamhunter. 'Oh boy, poor Atem' (my sides hurt!), THAT was funny! 'Yutz Dartz? I think that's funny too! 'Grubby little hands'! (laughs) I hope you agree that Kender20 should start Dreamhunter back up. :)

This is the first thing I have for pleasure in a while, and I just wanted to say I enjoyed it. When Mai was shown her potential future, some of the characters seemed a little more mean than they would be in the show. But overall, I enjoyed reading about her adventures.

By the way, what did you mean when you said Serenity had learned the art of blackmail from Tristan?

An awesome and heartwarming ending, Master! Angelica became a top model, Justin is cured and following his dream, and Mai and Jonouchi got married and had two children! A perfect way to finish this Christmas story! Master Rainwalker, you did wonderful! I look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future!

As I figured! Those two sleazeballs conspiring against Mai, just as the Ghost of Christmas Future warned. I'm so happy that Mai and the others managed to catch them and kick them out! And now on the night of the fashion show, Justin is going to be cured thanks to all the money that's going to be used for his heart surgery! That's so sweet! Keep it up, Master Rainwalker!

I'm so glad that the people she told her story to were very understanding! And that guy running the charity, Clyde Bettsworth, who knew that he was the clown that gave such a positive impact to Jonouchi's life! And what's this? Embezzlement in MaiGirl? I can't help but guess as to who's behind this one. Keep it up Master Rainwalker! You're doing a great job!

Awww, Mai and Jonouchi are reunited! And things certainly got steamy between them. You did pretty good on that one. And Awww! Mai did Janice right! And that's only just the beginning of the good things she's doing! Keep it up Master Rainwalker!

Boy, the Ghost of Christmas Future really gave Mai a good scare with that horrifying vision of a grim future, showing the consequences of her actions. And it definitely helped her realize how much she loved Jonouchi. And now that this trip is over, I can guess that Mai's finally going to get her act together and do what's right! Keep it up Master Rainwalker, keep it up!

Ah, so Janice has a brother there. That's so sweet of her to care for him! And Mai's certainly got a good glimpse of our friend Jonouchi over there! And Seto's dating a present day incarnation of Kisara and enjoying a meal with her family! But with her journey of Christmas Present over, there's only one ghost that's left... and Mai's got every reason to tremble! Keep it up Master Rainwalker!

And here's the point where her memories come by Jonouchi. And that was a true eye-opener there! Kinda makes me wonder if she'll be able to meet up with him again in the story. Come the Ghost of Christmas Present, she, and we, get a little insight to Janice's life, and her love. Who's at the hospital that she wants to go see? I guess we'll just have to find out, huh? Keep it up, Master Rainwalker!

Mai sure had a really sad childhood here. You wrote that pretty well. And Mai's got an eye-opener of the good memories as well. Like the sweet serenade that was performed for her. Great job so far, keep it up!

Ah, so Mai's daddy has come along to tell her of the three spirits of Christmas. And what do you know! The Ghost of Christmas past is none other than Beetlejuice! or at least, someone that looked like Beetlejuice anyway. But what does he have in store for our dear Mai, and what lesson does he have to teach her? I can't wait to find out. Keep it up, Master!

Hi Master Rainwalker! Thanks for giving me the heads up on the new story! Now let's get this review started!
Yep, Mai's definitely fit for a fashion career. But she's also quite the Scrooge in this story, clearly blind to the truth of the source of her financial problems. No doubt she's gonna start getting that much needed whack on the head to get some sense back into her. Keep it up Master Rainwalker!