Great writer, and great character. Sadly, hated the plot. Just not my cup of tea. Might as well have left the Uchihas to die, then there might have been more possibilities for the plot. Now that the Oc and Karachi are out of the village it seems like there will be too many Oc's coming in or too many people after them which WILL get tiring. It's strange how this story made me detest Shisui so much.

I don't get this. What happened? Is Kyou the original name of the main character? Did she died or just suddenly her consciousness transferred? Did Fuukou originally MC reborn or having her consciousness replaced by MC? What happened with Kakashi's sister anyway, I assume she was attacked but the information is all over the place in this story.
The grammar is good but the reader is having serious problem trying to follow the story. Why is Itachi suddenly there? Can anyone give me a rundown of what happened until chapter two in easier format? Thanks.

Ok finished! I like it! 8-10 would recommend! I say 8 cus I'm having a hard time figuring out if she is hating voices, why did kakashi attack? He wasn't controlled physically was he? I'm wondering if naruto left the village with Tanzo, the village doesn't seem to alerted about that, but naruto hasn't made an appearance. Mikoto is alive and well so I'm hoping less angst with sauske. As a mom I can't understand her jumping back into the force when she has a traumatized child at home. But that is just me. And one me thing, what happened with the fight at the river? You skimmed over that. What happened to her and how did she her away?
Anyway I loved it and hope to see new chapters soon! !

Chapter 19 question.
If I had to pick an anbu mask I'd be... hmm... raven. They are cool and smart birds. Can be assholes but beautiful too.

To your question in chapter 5. Zabuza. He didn't get enough of a story and was killed too easily in my opinion. This is the dude that went toe to tow with his kage (who happened to have a demon) and lived. And was taken down by kids and kakashi (not to undermine kakashi). Zabuza was trying to help his village and died a traitor. He saved a kid and taught haku as much as he could and they died on a bridge far from home. Their story should have been different. Instead the series is focused on a ADD prankster and an the king of angst. Idk Kishimoto blew it following sunshine and rainbows when they live in a world of death and gore. In my opinion you can't counsel a bad guy mid have him rethink his life. I mean I didn't watch that much of the series but did naruto ever kill a person? Or was it all Talk no Jutsu? How many times did he knock someone out so they can turn around and go back to a life of crime?
Zabuza was a good guy. Little scary, but he was a solider fighting for a way to free his country. Yea he had problems but his character was under developed.

I want you to know. I just opened this story, haven't read a word of it yet. But I only read stories with good reviews and not abandoned . Based on reviews you got both and I tip my hat to you. I'll let you know what I think. :)

Thanks for the update! I love your writing style and your mastery with weaving intrigue into your story. I’m sorry to hear about your dogI hope you’ve been recovering okay. I look forward to your next chapter!

theres another saying that you never really leave anbu

Awesome story and nice twist

I really like this story. It's a unique take on a reincarnated OC. I'm secretly fangirling really hard over Shisui having been the OC's boyfriend before the incident. The way the characters respond to the OC after the incident is really sweet.

There are parts to this story that are so dry and so sarcastic, I love it:

"Mikoto scoffs, slamming her susanoo's fists into the ground below them. The first smash breaks the walls into small bits, the second smash cracks the floor and the third, Fuuko can't hear beyond the thumping of blood in her ears and the mantra spinning in her head, I'm going to die and it's going to be Mikoto-san's fault."

Can she have both of them just saying

Whatttttt! Really with shisui lucky!

Hmmmm I am curious so she a girl in our world but she in kakashi sister has all the memories and abilities convenient I wanna see how it will play out

I am sorry to hear about your dog. I am glad you decided to update though. I don't really know the name of the Anbu masks, but any one with red eyeliner is a good choice. Kakashi's mask was a good combo with the sharingan. Thanks as always and until next time!

I wanna-have cried. I just power read through this, and I'm-wow. It's good, but it hurts my heart, ok? Now he knooows~ Kinda. Save the soul bit. Orochi, you stupid. Is Tenzou okay? Alive? *tears* I commend you on your story building and composing.